for Evolution7/14/2013 c1 Guest
Loved the story would live to have seen where his was going
Maria
Loved the story would live to have seen where his was going
Maria
4/2/2011 c5 
18Sakura Katana
I liked it. I'm interested to see where this is going. Quick punctuation note: make sure to put in question marks when needed.
Update soon!
18Sakura KatanaI liked it. I'm interested to see where this is going. Quick punctuation note: make sure to put in question marks when needed.
Update soon!
4/2/2011 c5 16ScarecrowMax
Yay! An update, I had thought you'd forgotten about this story. I'm glad you hadn't though. Please give more when you can.
16ScarecrowMaxYay! An update, I had thought you'd forgotten about this story. I'm glad you hadn't though. Please give more when you can.
3/12/2011 c3 Sakura Katana
Wow, this fic is awesome. I loved the Hawaiian shirt Wash reference and "Yeah, so I can kick it."
Wow, this fic is awesome. I loved the Hawaiian shirt Wash reference and "Yeah, so I can kick it."
8/19/2010 c4 3Viscountess Ko
LOVELOVELOVE. Perfect Alpha characterization, from the dialogue down to the details. LOVE IT. Really great job.
3Viscountess KoLOVELOVELOVE. Perfect Alpha characterization, from the dialogue down to the details. LOVE IT. Really great job.
7/30/2010 c2 6Vera Cobb
So I've just finished rewatching season 2, and I was trying to decide what happened to Alpha. And then, here I look and you've gone and written a story about it. Perfect! Poor Alpha must be so confused. The fact that in the show he chose to go above ground was kind of fascinating.
I'm really looking forward to see where this will go. Thanks for writing it :)
6Vera CobbSo I've just finished rewatching season 2, and I was trying to decide what happened to Alpha. And then, here I look and you've gone and written a story about it. Perfect! Poor Alpha must be so confused. The fact that in the show he chose to go above ground was kind of fascinating.
I'm really looking forward to see where this will go. Thanks for writing it :)
7/15/2010 c3 Elliesmeow
It's funny that he's so angry about something that was his idea in the first place. I wonder if he'll get back to that mindset by spending that time outside destroying tech?
Thanks for the new chapter. I thought aside from the conversation with T and Sierra everything was spot on, the aforementioned talk was a little off for me.;)
-Ellie
It's funny that he's so angry about something that was his idea in the first place. I wonder if he'll get back to that mindset by spending that time outside destroying tech?
Thanks for the new chapter. I thought aside from the conversation with T and Sierra everything was spot on, the aforementioned talk was a little off for me.;)
-Ellie
7/15/2010 c3 5JessTheGeek
Interesting chapter! I do love Alpha and Echo's interractions, very well written. Can't wait for next chapter!
5JessTheGeekInteresting chapter! I do love Alpha and Echo's interractions, very well written. Can't wait for next chapter!
4/18/2010 c2 Elliesmeow
Fantastic job. I'm curious to see if you'll take this farther, and if so..where will it go?
-Ellie
Fantastic job. I'm curious to see if you'll take this farther, and if so..where will it go?
-Ellie