for Family12/16/2014 c1 Chloe
*shudders* So... so... so creepy. It kind of a smack by reality saying that Seb really is evil - well, obviously, he's a demon-.
*shudders* So... so... so creepy. It kind of a smack by reality saying that Seb really is evil - well, obviously, he's a demon-.
9/25/2014 c1 Guest
"lovely" characterization of Sebastian
"lovely" characterization of Sebastian
2/15/2012 c1 Kaagaareth
I love it when people remember that Sebastian is a demon. Very nicely written; I enjoyed it.
I love it when people remember that Sebastian is a demon. Very nicely written; I enjoyed it.
5/31/2011 c1 
323Maiden of the Moon
This sent chills of terror up and down my spine. Short, and certainly not sweet- but a work of art all the same. Excellent job!
323Maiden of the MoonThis sent chills of terror up and down my spine. Short, and certainly not sweet- but a work of art all the same. Excellent job!
1/9/2011 c1 Green Day 4ever
How cruel that Sebastian. Well done bringing out the protective side of Ciel and reveling, or rather reminding us that Sebastian is downright evil; a demon despite what [most] fans would like to think.
How cruel that Sebastian. Well done bringing out the protective side of Ciel and reveling, or rather reminding us that Sebastian is downright evil; a demon despite what [most] fans would like to think.
6/23/2010 c1 deactivatedsinceforever
How evil and cruelly true (guess we should be thankful for the anime's ending, not that I can say much for the manga). Sebastian, you evil son of a bitch.
How evil and cruelly true (guess we should be thankful for the anime's ending, not that I can say much for the manga). Sebastian, you evil son of a bitch.
6/3/2010 c1 3Supreme Dictator of the World
I really enjoy reading about Sebastian's evil side and his less than loyal feelings towards Ciel. It's a very interesting take on things compared to the vast majority of shounen-ai stories out there on these two. Oh, i just really loved this fanfic! :)
3Supreme Dictator of the WorldI really enjoy reading about Sebastian's evil side and his less than loyal feelings towards Ciel. It's a very interesting take on things compared to the vast majority of shounen-ai stories out there on these two. Oh, i just really loved this fanfic! :)
3/7/2010 c1 1k+Val-Creative
Never read a fanfic concept like this for this fandom. I really adoreit-especially Sebastian feeding off the fear that Ciel has for what will happen to his childre. Really splendid! 3
1k+Val-CreativeNever read a fanfic concept like this for this fandom. I really adoreit-especially Sebastian feeding off the fear that Ciel has for what will happen to his childre. Really splendid! 3
3/6/2010 c1 Mendori
Possibily the first Kuroshitsuji's fanfiction that I've really enjoyed, so far.
I really like how you characterized Sebastian and Ciel, I believe that they're both very IC.
The concept is just so original, and well-developped as well.
I feel sorry for not being able of expressing how much I loved this story, but it's rather hard for me as this is not my former language. Please excuse my poor English.
Still, this story amazed me. I really do hope you'll write again about this series.
Possibily the first Kuroshitsuji's fanfiction that I've really enjoyed, so far.
I really like how you characterized Sebastian and Ciel, I believe that they're both very IC.
The concept is just so original, and well-developped as well.
I feel sorry for not being able of expressing how much I loved this story, but it's rather hard for me as this is not my former language. Please excuse my poor English.
Still, this story amazed me. I really do hope you'll write again about this series.
2/27/2010 c1 14Crystal Allen
WOW, this was so completely, brilliantly, evilly FABULOUS. Poor Ciel, fearing for the lives of his children even though he knows it will do him no good, and Sebastian making them love him just for the pleasure and irony of Ciel's fear! Well written and very in-character. Just imagining the look on Ciel's face as Sebastian peeks into the cradle at his son... Pure awesomeness.
"Sebastian smiles"... *shiver* :)
14Crystal AllenWOW, this was so completely, brilliantly, evilly FABULOUS. Poor Ciel, fearing for the lives of his children even though he knows it will do him no good, and Sebastian making them love him just for the pleasure and irony of Ciel's fear! Well written and very in-character. Just imagining the look on Ciel's face as Sebastian peeks into the cradle at his son... Pure awesomeness.
"Sebastian smiles"... *shiver* :)
2/27/2010 c1 desertdiamonds
Ah...I love the originality of Sebastian's concept on Ciel's children and Ciel's concept on Sebastian's concept of possibly wanting to make a contract with them, it's interesting
And as it's your first Kuro fanfic, it's impressive because you've already captured their characteristics
Well done, keep it up!
Ah...I love the originality of Sebastian's concept on Ciel's children and Ciel's concept on Sebastian's concept of possibly wanting to make a contract with them, it's interesting
And as it's your first Kuro fanfic, it's impressive because you've already captured their characteristics
Well done, keep it up!