for What In The?2/2/2011 c2 thegirlwhoforgottologin
definately 1 of the most ooriginal, didnt like the baby bashing though, what happened to a mothers bond?
definately 1 of the most ooriginal, didnt like the baby bashing though, what happened to a mothers bond?
4/17/2010 c2 
2FantasyFictionFan
Oh please please please do a sequeli have ready many a fred and hermione fan fictions and this one i have to say is so distinct to the others (well all of them are) but i am very intrigued with this one what will happen to her 'family' now ron and the kids etc. please please do carry it on :D
2FantasyFictionFanOh please please please do a sequeli have ready many a fred and hermione fan fictions and this one i have to say is so distinct to the others (well all of them are) but i am very intrigued with this one what will happen to her 'family' now ron and the kids etc. please please do carry it on :D
4/5/2010 c2 Critic007
Ah, well, it's a good thing cruel criticism is fine with you, even though you wont be receiving any of it from me :)
Oh, so For the Record, I Blame You was a prequel...that makes sense. Because with the last line, I was thinking 'is that there on purpose? Or does she not notice the repetition?'.
Loved this line: she actually confiscated my wand! - it's like a teacher with a Kindergartener.
I thoroughly enjoyed this, I didn't think it was too long at all. You certainly didn't drag it out. A sequel isn't necessary because there aren't that many loose ends to tie up, but it would be nice.
The grammar/spelling errors in this are a little more prominent than with the first chapter, but it was easy to look over.
Well done :)
- Critic007
Ah, well, it's a good thing cruel criticism is fine with you, even though you wont be receiving any of it from me :)
Oh, so For the Record, I Blame You was a prequel...that makes sense. Because with the last line, I was thinking 'is that there on purpose? Or does she not notice the repetition?'.
Loved this line: she actually confiscated my wand! - it's like a teacher with a Kindergartener.
I thoroughly enjoyed this, I didn't think it was too long at all. You certainly didn't drag it out. A sequel isn't necessary because there aren't that many loose ends to tie up, but it would be nice.
The grammar/spelling errors in this are a little more prominent than with the first chapter, but it was easy to look over.
Well done :)
- Critic007
4/5/2010 c1 Critic007
Aw. Poor Hermione. I quite liked this, definitely new, refreshingly new actually.
'it's a shame such good looks had to be wasted on such a pathetic waste of human space.' - really liked this line.
This chapter explained a lot, maybe a bit too much, just remember, mystery is always fun :)
Liked the tense and the 'person' in this, I haven't read one like this in a while.
Well done on the first chapter.
- Critic07
Aw. Poor Hermione. I quite liked this, definitely new, refreshingly new actually.
'it's a shame such good looks had to be wasted on such a pathetic waste of human space.' - really liked this line.
This chapter explained a lot, maybe a bit too much, just remember, mystery is always fun :)
Liked the tense and the 'person' in this, I haven't read one like this in a while.
Well done on the first chapter.
- Critic07
2/27/2010 c1 Scooby
Not exactly where I was hoping it would end, but brilliantly written all the same. It feels as though I've read a multichaptered fic covering their entire history together. Would you consider adding a second part in which Hermione takes the kids and runs off to live with Fred after all? Her refusing to try in case it goes pear shaped is too close for comfort, better the devil you know after all. Please give me the opportunity to live vicariously.
Not exactly where I was hoping it would end, but brilliantly written all the same. It feels as though I've read a multichaptered fic covering their entire history together. Would you consider adding a second part in which Hermione takes the kids and runs off to live with Fred after all? Her refusing to try in case it goes pear shaped is too close for comfort, better the devil you know after all. Please give me the opportunity to live vicariously.
2/27/2010 c1 AwesomeNinjaTaco
This is pretty amazing. I loved it. the only thing i see that caused me some confusion the entire way was wasn't Fred the one who Died?
Any way, You should Continue it. I look forward to reading it!
This is pretty amazing. I loved it. the only thing i see that caused me some confusion the entire way was wasn't Fred the one who Died?
Any way, You should Continue it. I look forward to reading it!