
4/23/2021 c1 Anon
Very well written and enjoyable to read - apart from the Amy bashing at the end. Just because Josh briefly pursued Amy rather than Donna doesn't make her a bad person.
Very well written and enjoyable to read - apart from the Amy bashing at the end. Just because Josh briefly pursued Amy rather than Donna doesn't make her a bad person.
12/15/2012 c1
14Sweet Trufflepuff
Excellent Story. Well written and I could hear Lou's voice. You got the character just right and any time Amy gets crapped on, I'm happy. I never liked that character.

Excellent Story. Well written and I could hear Lou's voice. You got the character just right and any time Amy gets crapped on, I'm happy. I never liked that character.
6/11/2010 c1 Sam
Loved the story! Very well written and I can see Lou thinking this way. Good job :)
Loved the story! Very well written and I can see Lou thinking this way. Good job :)