for Love At First Sight6/10/2010 c7 Ms.EdwardCullen4ever
hahahaha real funny how she drop her towel lol... who did she expect the tooth farie lol... great job keep on the great job
hahahaha real funny how she drop her towel lol... who did she expect the tooth farie lol... great job keep on the great job
6/10/2010 c7 RPattzmania
Great chappie as always!
Edward's reaction(telling Emmett about it) is so boyish!
And there is Alice in the next chapter!
Great chappie as always!
Edward's reaction(telling Emmett about it) is so boyish!
And there is Alice in the next chapter!
6/8/2010 c6 mldewolf
Defintely lemons! W/o a doubt. How can a story be a story of romance w/o lemons?
The physical aspect of a relationship is important and it's intimate and in my opinion, causes the characters to have a deeper connection.
Plus, I'm a lemon whore. I love my lemons.
This was a great chapter. Keep up the good work. Hope to hear from you sooner rather than later.
Defintely lemons! W/o a doubt. How can a story be a story of romance w/o lemons?
The physical aspect of a relationship is important and it's intimate and in my opinion, causes the characters to have a deeper connection.
Plus, I'm a lemon whore. I love my lemons.
This was a great chapter. Keep up the good work. Hope to hear from you sooner rather than later.
6/7/2010 c6 
22gemma loves edward
Really good but it's really hard to get back in to the story:( I still love it please include lemons :)
22gemma loves edwardReally good but it's really hard to get back in to the story:( I still love it please include lemons :)
6/7/2010 c6 RPattzmania
AND YOU'RE BACK!
Nice "chappie"!I really liked it!This was a good way to get back on track!
Update soon!
AND YOU'RE BACK!
Nice "chappie"!I really liked it!This was a good way to get back on track!
Update soon!
3/16/2010 c5 2hiatus.prettymuch
good story... im thinking it may be going a little fast.. i mean they don't necessarily know each other that well i would say its unbelievable if it wasnt twilight :) i mean theyre meant to be. lol.. but yea. its just they dont know each other that well... i dont know. its still good though. just a lil constructive criticism ;)
keep going, its got potential! :D
Dianaa.!
2hiatus.prettymuchgood story... im thinking it may be going a little fast.. i mean they don't necessarily know each other that well i would say its unbelievable if it wasnt twilight :) i mean theyre meant to be. lol.. but yea. its just they dont know each other that well... i dont know. its still good though. just a lil constructive criticism ;)
keep going, its got potential! :D
Dianaa.!
3/12/2010 c5 mldewolf
Hello!
I have read your first 5 chapters of your Love At First Sight story and am thoroughly enjoying it.
It's my kind of story. Canon pairings and fast moving.
I like cussing and lots of vocally dirty and sweet talken lemons (smirk). I'm just a perv that way (smile). Please forgive me.
I have read like 70 stories between FF and Twilighted and have a lot to compare to your story and just wanted you to know you've got potential and to keep going.
I hope you keep writing no matter how many reviews you get and decide to finish the story.
It would be good practice and a great opportunity for you to grow as a writer.
I'm really glad that you got/found a Beta. Not that you need one but I'm still learning about them and good ones seem to be hard to find.
Have a great weekend and until next time...
Hello!
I have read your first 5 chapters of your Love At First Sight story and am thoroughly enjoying it.
It's my kind of story. Canon pairings and fast moving.
I like cussing and lots of vocally dirty and sweet talken lemons (smirk). I'm just a perv that way (smile). Please forgive me.
I have read like 70 stories between FF and Twilighted and have a lot to compare to your story and just wanted you to know you've got potential and to keep going.
I hope you keep writing no matter how many reviews you get and decide to finish the story.
It would be good practice and a great opportunity for you to grow as a writer.
I'm really glad that you got/found a Beta. Not that you need one but I'm still learning about them and good ones seem to be hard to find.
Have a great weekend and until next time...
3/12/2010 c5 RPattzmania
OMG!That was absolutely great!The best chapter!I loved it!
Hahahaha...the ringtone was hilarious!
I wonder what Edward's reaction would be...
OMG!That was absolutely great!The best chapter!I loved it!
Hahahaha...the ringtone was hilarious!
I wonder what Edward's reaction would be...