3/6/2010 c4 RPattzmania
This chapter is a little bit short but a very very good one!
Can't wait for the next one...
This chapter is a little bit short but a very very good one!
Can't wait for the next one...
3/6/2010 c4 2potterandweasely
your chapters need to be alot longer I usualy do 8 pages or something on microsoft word and that's enough. The least you should do is 2.
Great story. I love man united! I've been to see them so many times! my grandads a Die hard fan I live near manchester ( west yorkshiree! ).
I'm off abseiling off the Old traffor for cystic fibrosist
your chapters need to be alot longer I usualy do 8 pages or something on microsoft word and that's enough. The least you should do is 2.
Great story. I love man united! I've been to see them so many times! my grandads a Die hard fan I live near manchester ( west yorkshiree! ).
I'm off abseiling off the Old traffor for cystic fibrosist
3/5/2010 c3 RPattzmania
Hahahaha...I love Emmett!And Mike is the manager of Manchester United?You know,at first I thought you were talking about american football...
I really enjoyed it!
Now,I don't want to stress you but UPDATE SOON!
Hahahaha...I love Emmett!And Mike is the manager of Manchester United?You know,at first I thought you were talking about american football...
I really enjoyed it!
Now,I don't want to stress you but UPDATE SOON!