for Cold blood1/10/2022 c5 RoyalsRulez
Umm, why didn't he use the map?
Umm, why didn't he use the map?
1/5/2022 c1 
11Astroman1000
Damn, Fawkes screeching while Pomfrey calmly ignores hims seconds after he helped her heal Harry better comes off as a horror movie scene.
11Astroman1000Damn, Fawkes screeching while Pomfrey calmly ignores hims seconds after he helped her heal Harry better comes off as a horror movie scene.
12/31/2021 c4 22stevem1
I like Harry’s reaction to run. It is draconic (which I think is the thrust of the story). His reaction to Hermione is anything but. It’s kind of pathetic.
22stevem1I like Harry’s reaction to run. It is draconic (which I think is the thrust of the story). His reaction to Hermione is anything but. It’s kind of pathetic.
12/31/2021 c3 stevem1
Yeah, I don’t think Harry should be forgiving Hermione. It would be one thing if they weren’t dating, but they were. So she’s established she’ll through her relationship under a bus if it means getting even with someone else. The phrase, fool me once, shame on you- Fool me twice, shame on me, comes to mind.
Yeah, I don’t think Harry should be forgiving Hermione. It would be one thing if they weren’t dating, but they were. So she’s established she’ll through her relationship under a bus if it means getting even with someone else. The phrase, fool me once, shame on you- Fool me twice, shame on me, comes to mind.
12/31/2021 c35 mineralwasserflasche
Nice rewrite! I do prefer the new version - thanks for taking the time and effort!
Nice rewrite! I do prefer the new version - thanks for taking the time and effort!
12/25/2021 c25 Guest
Wait a sec; Harry's great at runes and enchanting now! He could get a giant plush teddy for Norbie, enchant the crap out of it, and then Norbie wouldn't need to kill any more brown bears for toys and pillows! Ooooh, they need to take a picture of that, of Norbert playing and cuddling with his new Indestructi-bear, and send it to Hagrid!
Wait a sec; Harry's great at runes and enchanting now! He could get a giant plush teddy for Norbie, enchant the crap out of it, and then Norbie wouldn't need to kill any more brown bears for toys and pillows! Ooooh, they need to take a picture of that, of Norbert playing and cuddling with his new Indestructi-bear, and send it to Hagrid!
12/26/2021 c35 Ironcoil
I truly love this story, have come back and re read it a couple times. You really have a talent and I truly hope your muse will give you ideas for future stories as you have a way to really play with this universe to create something new.
I truly love this story, have come back and re read it a couple times. You really have a talent and I truly hope your muse will give you ideas for future stories as you have a way to really play with this universe to create something new.
12/21/2021 c3 Guest
Kind of ridiculous.
Kind of ridiculous.
12/16/2021 c1 Guest
Loved it. Will look for more of your work
Loved it. Will look for more of your work