for Ten Counting Days3/18/2010 c1 Irrevocable Memory
Hey there ;)
I spotted some grammatical errors here in there, but it's not that big, and you can pretty much still understand the story, so all is well and fine. Some parts it still feels rushed, though.
I like how you ended the days.
For example,
"How?"
"Your smile."
It gives a sense of ..hm, certainty.
Anyway, hope to hear from you soon, ne? :)
Hey there ;)
I spotted some grammatical errors here in there, but it's not that big, and you can pretty much still understand the story, so all is well and fine. Some parts it still feels rushed, though.
I like how you ended the days.
For example,
"How?"
"Your smile."
It gives a sense of ..hm, certainty.
Anyway, hope to hear from you soon, ne? :)
3/3/2010 c1 
6Transient Tears
Hey there! Sorry I wasn't able to read it yesterday. I fall asleep. You do have some errors but it's minor so, it's fine. And yeah, it's not a humor fic but I think it fits Hurt/Comfort. And thanks for this fic! I really like it! See you in Amicus!
=CrimsonCinnamon Eyes=
6Transient TearsHey there! Sorry I wasn't able to read it yesterday. I fall asleep. You do have some errors but it's minor so, it's fine. And yeah, it's not a humor fic but I think it fits Hurt/Comfort. And thanks for this fic! I really like it! See you in Amicus!
=CrimsonCinnamon Eyes=
3/2/2010 c1 YellowFever
at first i was like 10 days is her title why did she stop at 8 but then i remembered the first to parts -_-
it cute i liked it
at first i was like 10 days is her title why did she stop at 8 but then i remembered the first to parts -_-
it cute i liked it