for Life After War5/2/2020 c3 Eva
Hey so this is great but um about the future chapters? I'm guessing they won't ever come?
Hey so this is great but um about the future chapters? I'm guessing they won't ever come?
11/14/2017 c3 
3Charlee56
I don't know what kind of help you thought you needed, but you were doing beautifully! You should pick this up and finish it, in my opinion. You were off to a great start and then the story jus
3Charlee56I don't know what kind of help you thought you needed, but you were doing beautifully! You should pick this up and finish it, in my opinion. You were off to a great start and then the story jus
12/1/2013 c3 Guest
Y u no finish?
That was really good
Y u no finish?
That was really good
8/3/2011 c3 firefairy789
I think the dream should be about Percy and Annabeth being put to the test and falling deeper in love.
I think the dream should be about Percy and Annabeth being put to the test and falling deeper in love.
10/26/2010 c3 2xxsamluvsuxx
there cud be an army of monsters and really fit girls nd boys that try to split them up on their quest.athena created it to see how much percy loves annabeth,and if he would risk his life for her
2xxsamluvsuxxthere cud be an army of monsters and really fit girls nd boys that try to split them up on their quest.athena created it to see how much percy loves annabeth,and if he would risk his life for her
6/29/2010 c3 5ID.beLIEve
I have no clue what the dream should be but I want you to continue your story! :)
5ID.beLIEveI have no clue what the dream should be but I want you to continue your story! :)
3/12/2010 c1 sammydon
This story is amazing. the way you wrote it made it sound as if rick riordan himself was speaking :)
(note that i'm a newbie and this is the first review i've evr written)
This story is amazing. the way you wrote it made it sound as if rick riordan himself was speaking :)
(note that i'm a newbie and this is the first review i've evr written)
3/3/2010 c1 10B. D. Legan
This is kinda cool! I know it's hard to write your first fic, but it gets easier, trust me.
Another word of advice: NEVER put "No flames, please" in you r summery. It just attracts flamers like crazy.
All in all, it was pretty well written!
~B. D. Legan
10B. D. LeganThis is kinda cool! I know it's hard to write your first fic, but it gets easier, trust me.
Another word of advice: NEVER put "No flames, please" in you r summery. It just attracts flamers like crazy.
All in all, it was pretty well written!
~B. D. Legan