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9/16/2011 c1 21Amata le Fay
I really enjoyed this piece. What particularly stood out to me was the style, which matched the play in being very... deliberate, almost as if translated from the actual French, and how you took all of Georges' ideas in the play and expanded upon them into a lot of his philosophy. Makes me wonder why "color" isn't on his list of things at the beginning ("through design...etc.), but "light" is... maybe they're synonymous in his mind? Hmm... Anyway, great job!
3/13/2010 c1 24RedCloakedMaiden
Very nice! You have quite a way of making your words as expressive as your colors! The only thing that could have improved this would be to add your pov's character into this, paint it with ther (presumably George's) personality.

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