for Do Dreams Always Come True?9/12/2011 c1 
2vengeancelover1930
um i have to tell u that i am in love with this story please please please write more on it please omg i just love it
2vengeancelover1930um i have to tell u that i am in love with this story please please please write more on it please omg i just love it
8/13/2011 c4 6dhredrev
waaaa why dont u continue that? its a funny awesome story !
i’ll wait the next chappy yea
6dhredrevwaaaa why dont u continue that? its a funny awesome story !
i’ll wait the next chappy yea
5/3/2011 c4 2keepsecrets
Luv this! Your story keeps making me laugh! She seems to get beat up a lot though... Haha! Write more soon!
2keepsecretsLuv this! Your story keeps making me laugh! She seems to get beat up a lot though... Haha! Write more soon!
4/11/2010 c1 3Synya Gates
Hello, just wanted to review this story. did you know for chapters 2,3 and 4 you don't have the correct song names? please don't take it personal if I corecct you. and I like the story btw. here's the chapters with the right song names:
2. Betrayed
3. After life.
4. warmness and Soul
3Synya GatesHello, just wanted to review this story. did you know for chapters 2,3 and 4 you don't have the correct song names? please don't take it personal if I corecct you. and I like the story btw. here's the chapters with the right song names:
2. Betrayed
3. After life.
4. warmness and Soul
3/20/2010 c4 6kelly21us
"Are you trying to make her show you her boobs?" Jimmy asked me suspiciously.
is this sentence how it is supposed to be?
should it be:
"Is he trying to make her show you her boobs?" Jimmy asked me suspiciously.
or
"Are you trying to make her show you her boobs?" Jimmy asked Jonny suspiciously.
6kelly21us"Are you trying to make her show you her boobs?" Jimmy asked me suspiciously.
is this sentence how it is supposed to be?
should it be:
"Is he trying to make her show you her boobs?" Jimmy asked me suspiciously.
or
"Are you trying to make her show you her boobs?" Jimmy asked Jonny suspiciously.
3/4/2010 c3 kelly21us
He gets into his dresser, which is right next to his bed, and pulls out a me and I give him a tired smile.
is "pulls out a me" what you meant to say?
other than that, it is great!
He gets into his dresser, which is right next to his bed, and pulls out a me and I give him a tired smile.
is "pulls out a me" what you meant to say?
other than that, it is great!