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10/25/2014 c7 17tiCocoChanelle
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6/2/2011 c5 18Shanghai.Loving
the story's good, no ofence but u have some spelling mistakes and grammer mistakes, it sorta makes it a litle harder to understand.
6/2/2010 c6 5NYR88
Just found this story and it's pretty good. Interesting plot. Only thing I might suggest is that the way you have it formatted is a little difficult to read easily. Maybe you could start a new line each time somebody says something - it makes following conversations a bit easier...in my opinion anyway.

But keep going either way.

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