for Harry Potter and the Four Lords of Death12/3 c1 Guest
Thanx for the warning that it was à Harry/ginny story. Prevented me from doing a great mistake of reading it Noting against your writing just hate that paring in stories!
Thanx for the warning that it was à Harry/ginny story. Prevented me from doing a great mistake of reading it Noting against your writing just hate that paring in stories!
11/22/2013 c1 Hytekrednek
Ok so far. A few grammatical errors but nothing to serious. Hope that you are going to keep going as this seems an interesting concept for a HP story.
James
Ok so far. A few grammatical errors but nothing to serious. Hope that you are going to keep going as this seems an interesting concept for a HP story.
James
6/19/2012 c1 
7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
7Myra the Dovahkiingreat story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
9/6/2010 c1 2PSaid
This is not meant to rush you with the chapter, but you wrote a couple of months ago (on your profile) that the next chapter would be up within a couple of days, however I haven't seen it yet, so I am beginning to wonder whether the story has been abandoned or something like that. I find it has promise so I hope that you are still working on it and that it won't be too long until you post the next chapter.
PSaid
2PSaidThis is not meant to rush you with the chapter, but you wrote a couple of months ago (on your profile) that the next chapter would be up within a couple of days, however I haven't seen it yet, so I am beginning to wonder whether the story has been abandoned or something like that. I find it has promise so I hope that you are still working on it and that it won't be too long until you post the next chapter.
PSaid
8/22/2010 c1 7ConstableCorvus
i like it it has a lot of promise there were a few spelling errors but it was still good please update soon
7ConstableCorvusi like it it has a lot of promise there were a few spelling errors but it was still good please update soon
3/26/2010 c1 loretta537
this sounds like it might be a good story, my only problem is you said harry had a backpack he used for school. since harry is just turning four he wouldnt be going to school at this time and i dont think the dursleys would pay for him to go to preschool
this sounds like it might be a good story, my only problem is you said harry had a backpack he used for school. since harry is just turning four he wouldnt be going to school at this time and i dont think the dursleys would pay for him to go to preschool
3/4/2010 c1 peruser
I like strong Harry stories, so I think I'll give this a try. When I say strong I don't just mean physically and magically, I mean emotions confidence and self worth. I hate it when the Dursleys have beaten him down so much that he feels like he's worth nothing, and that never changes no matter how strong he tries to act on the outside.
I like strong Harry stories, so I think I'll give this a try. When I say strong I don't just mean physically and magically, I mean emotions confidence and self worth. I hate it when the Dursleys have beaten him down so much that he feels like he's worth nothing, and that never changes no matter how strong he tries to act on the outside.