
5/4/2010 c1
1Inmyhead982000
So beautiful...I almost cried...but i didnt so thats okay! i love it a lot...

So beautiful...I almost cried...but i didnt so thats okay! i love it a lot...
3/30/2010 c1 AppleDoodle
I love this! I actually cried!
I'm not the biggest HitsuHina fan, but this is one of my favourite fanfics ever, and may have changed my opinion of Hinamori (the reason I don't like HitsuHina that much is because I love Hitsugaya but I used to hate Hinamori... but you may have changed that.)
Go Hinamori for biting Aizen!
'the ice and the fire, the boy and the girl, the dragon and the phoenix' is such a brilliant idea/metaphor.
(The reason I'm not logged in is that my pc's playing up, but AppleDoodle is my real penname.)
I love this! I actually cried!
I'm not the biggest HitsuHina fan, but this is one of my favourite fanfics ever, and may have changed my opinion of Hinamori (the reason I don't like HitsuHina that much is because I love Hitsugaya but I used to hate Hinamori... but you may have changed that.)
Go Hinamori for biting Aizen!
'the ice and the fire, the boy and the girl, the dragon and the phoenix' is such a brilliant idea/metaphor.
(The reason I'm not logged in is that my pc's playing up, but AppleDoodle is my real penname.)
3/13/2010 c1 applez
Oh. My. God. This is brilliant!
I'm the world's biggest Hitsu-fangirl, and I hate HitsuHina stuff, BUT I LOVE THIS!
I didn't like the bit at the end, though, as it ruins the mood a bit.
'the ice and the fire' is pure genius!
This is pure genius. I love it!
Oh. My. God. This is brilliant!
I'm the world's biggest Hitsu-fangirl, and I hate HitsuHina stuff, BUT I LOVE THIS!
I didn't like the bit at the end, though, as it ruins the mood a bit.
'the ice and the fire' is pure genius!
This is pure genius. I love it!
3/12/2010 c1
18Kalow
Very nice. You used very descriptive language that really makes the reader feel how much pain Momo and Toushiro are in. It was very tragic and sad, though you ended it on a happy note.

Very nice. You used very descriptive language that really makes the reader feel how much pain Momo and Toushiro are in. It was very tragic and sad, though you ended it on a happy note.
3/7/2010 c1
20Warrayfinson
I was so close to crying! This was really sad, but I really liked the ending :)
Very nicely written as well :D
Hope to see more hitsuhina fanfics soon ;)
Keep Writing!

I was so close to crying! This was really sad, but I really liked the ending :)
Very nicely written as well :D
Hope to see more hitsuhina fanfics soon ;)
Keep Writing!