for Feelings for My Hanyou (OLD VERSION, SOON TO BE DELETED)7/15/2013 c31 wolf2ong
Keep going with the story hehe damn it makes me blush, its really exciting and I don't mined the spelling mistakes and stuff hehehhe just get Kagome and Inuyasha together its sooo fucken cute ahhh. PLease up date and if u rewrite it, it will take forever ;(
Keep going with the story hehe damn it makes me blush, its really exciting and I don't mined the spelling mistakes and stuff hehehhe just get Kagome and Inuyasha together its sooo fucken cute ahhh. PLease up date and if u rewrite it, it will take forever ;(
6/18/2013 c32 Mrs.Inuyasha1
DONT DELETE IT! UPDATE!''!
DONT DELETE IT! UPDATE!''!
6/17/2013 c20 
2yupella
Ohhhhhh! I love your writing! please don't give up and put yourself down! You are an amazing writer!
2yupellaOhhhhhh! I love your writing! please don't give up and put yourself down! You are an amazing writer!
6/13/2013 c2 4angel2798
I've only read two chapters and I already don't like it. My main problems are grammar, punctuation, and the just the natural flow of the dialogue. It's just not working out. Reading the summary (which also had some errors), I though it would've been better. This story has potential, so PLEASE get a BETA reader or just redo this entire story and fix past mistakes. Sorry if this is offensive to you but this is really what makes readers not want to continue your fanfics.
4angel2798I've only read two chapters and I already don't like it. My main problems are grammar, punctuation, and the just the natural flow of the dialogue. It's just not working out. Reading the summary (which also had some errors), I though it would've been better. This story has potential, so PLEASE get a BETA reader or just redo this entire story and fix past mistakes. Sorry if this is offensive to you but this is really what makes readers not want to continue your fanfics.
6/13/2013 c31 Awsomeness7
Well I'll tell you the truth here, I have utterly no idea what this fic is about other than what I get from the summary. But the summary already has grammar mistakes and sounds like a very corny plot. The length of 30 chapters is rather nice, but again, I don't remember this story at all. I probably read this when I first discovered fanfiction as I don't read Inuyasha fics anymore so I didn't mind horrible quality. However I would indeed like a rewrite of this and I'd like this story to inspire me into reading more Inuyasha again. Despite the summary sounding extremely corny, I don't think you should change it too much. Keep it in the modern world and have Inuyasha and Kagome be best friends who randomly had sex on a drunken night or something. Perhaps even add in Sango as Inuyasha's girlfriend to make the mess even worse. If you do however, then I'd hope you don't involve Sango too much simply because Sango is my favorite character.
Well I'll tell you the truth here, I have utterly no idea what this fic is about other than what I get from the summary. But the summary already has grammar mistakes and sounds like a very corny plot. The length of 30 chapters is rather nice, but again, I don't remember this story at all. I probably read this when I first discovered fanfiction as I don't read Inuyasha fics anymore so I didn't mind horrible quality. However I would indeed like a rewrite of this and I'd like this story to inspire me into reading more Inuyasha again. Despite the summary sounding extremely corny, I don't think you should change it too much. Keep it in the modern world and have Inuyasha and Kagome be best friends who randomly had sex on a drunken night or something. Perhaps even add in Sango as Inuyasha's girlfriend to make the mess even worse. If you do however, then I'd hope you don't involve Sango too much simply because Sango is my favorite character.
6/29/2012 c30 Guest
I love your story so much. They're all pervs but Inuyasha is a good perv. Lol. I'm not very good at reviews either but I know you guys like them so I try.
I love your story so much. They're all pervs but Inuyasha is a good perv. Lol. I'm not very good at reviews either but I know you guys like them so I try.
6/28/2012 c30 2manga-animelove
YAAY... I can still see their reactions like it happens right on front of me... D
And Inuyasha... "Rolled over and lolled out my ring"... ROFL... XD I laughed so hard that it almost hurt... D
And I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry... I've been so stressed lately that I forgot... TTTT *bow very deeply* I'll be there from now on, if you still want me as your beta... )
2manga-animeloveYAAY... I can still see their reactions like it happens right on front of me... D
And Inuyasha... "Rolled over and lolled out my ring"... ROFL... XD I laughed so hard that it almost hurt... D
And I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry... I've been so stressed lately that I forgot... TTTT *bow very deeply* I'll be there from now on, if you still want me as your beta... )