for A Day With Jimmy6/5/2013 c1 
12Enamie
I find this so hilarious how you came up for the idea of this story xD Randomly thinking about trees HA xD keep up the good writing :3
12EnamieI find this so hilarious how you came up for the idea of this story xD Randomly thinking about trees HA xD keep up the good writing :3
7/11/2011 c1 9foREVerTheMusicKid
I FREAKIN LOVED THIS! JIMMY IS THE FREAKIN AWESOME DRUMMER! :D R.I.P the rev! )':
oh and ignore that rude comment below mine screw her! Keep writing awesome stories! YOU ROCK!
9foREVerTheMusicKidI FREAKIN LOVED THIS! JIMMY IS THE FREAKIN AWESOME DRUMMER! :D R.I.P the rev! )':
oh and ignore that rude comment below mine screw her! Keep writing awesome stories! YOU ROCK!
5/15/2010 c1 12RaeTakesTheWorld
First off I hope you can take criticism because I've got some.
This story is not in the category of M. M is mature content, sure there was cussing but come on get real, five year olds do that now. When you write a mature story it usually contains sexual content.
I don't know if you're like an innocent twelve year old or something, but even if you are, this is still ridiculous.
Secondly I think you should attend some kind of writing class...or if you are young then you should stop ditching your English class. Your grammar and punctuation is fine...i guess...but it's not in paragraph form or anything like that. I don't know if you were intending for it to be this way but not many people like reading stories like this.
One last thing...thank god this was only a one-shot.
I'm so sorry if you think I've been incredibly harsh, but in the long run I hope this helps you with your writing.
12RaeTakesTheWorldFirst off I hope you can take criticism because I've got some.
This story is not in the category of M. M is mature content, sure there was cussing but come on get real, five year olds do that now. When you write a mature story it usually contains sexual content.
I don't know if you're like an innocent twelve year old or something, but even if you are, this is still ridiculous.
Secondly I think you should attend some kind of writing class...or if you are young then you should stop ditching your English class. Your grammar and punctuation is fine...i guess...but it's not in paragraph form or anything like that. I don't know if you were intending for it to be this way but not many people like reading stories like this.
One last thing...thank god this was only a one-shot.
I'm so sorry if you think I've been incredibly harsh, but in the long run I hope this helps you with your writing.