for Incompletely Human11/6/2012 c14 Edward's spouse
excellent. waiting for more. i hope you are going to finish this story eventually.
excellent. waiting for more. i hope you are going to finish this story eventually.
4/13/2012 c14 
32Winnie1991
So, I know it's been a long time but I was going back through my favorites, re-reading some of them. I as re-reading yours and realised that it wasn't complete and it left with a cliff hanger. I was just wondering if you had thoughts of completing it or if you were through writin it or what?
32Winnie1991So, I know it's been a long time but I was going back through my favorites, re-reading some of them. I as re-reading yours and realised that it wasn't complete and it left with a cliff hanger. I was just wondering if you had thoughts of completing it or if you were through writin it or what?
1/23/2011 c14 Noble Korhedron
W.T.F? Why's Bella suddenly become hysterically upset? Did someone attack Charlie? :-(
W.T.F? Why's Bella suddenly become hysterically upset? Did someone attack Charlie? :-(
10/20/2010 c9 Noble Korhedron
Seems I forgot to review 'til now... Ooooopsie! :-P Story is lookin' good so far and I'm lovin' the new CarElla! :-P
Seems I forgot to review 'til now... Ooooopsie! :-P Story is lookin' good so far and I'm lovin' the new CarElla! :-P
10/3/2010 c12 angelofdeath177
i really like your story. its such a change from the normal fanfiction. please put more bellaxedward!
i really like your story. its such a change from the normal fanfiction. please put more bellaxedward!