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7/30/2011 c2 MiscellaneousTopics
Just simply wonderful. You kept the characters so in character, and displayed what their emotions would be. I love how this contains humor, romance, and drama. The kimbley and miles thing did throw me off but then the whole Mei chan asking about what sex is made my day. I hope you can update soon even though it's been a year.
Just simply wonderful. You kept the characters so in character, and displayed what their emotions would be. I love how this contains humor, romance, and drama. The kimbley and miles thing did throw me off but then the whole Mei chan asking about what sex is made my day. I hope you can update soon even though it's been a year.
10/26/2010 c1 
9thegriffin88
Finally! Finally someone points out the fact that Kim's a toothpick.
“Ffff…I hate the cold.” Kimblee grumbled.
“That’s because you’re barely flesh and bones. There’s nothing to ya Stringbean!” Sapphire said, poking him harshly in the ribs.
“Ow! Watch it! You have sharp claws!” Kimblee yelped.
From Sapphire's Redemption.
9thegriffin88Finally! Finally someone points out the fact that Kim's a toothpick.
“Ffff…I hate the cold.” Kimblee grumbled.
“That’s because you’re barely flesh and bones. There’s nothing to ya Stringbean!” Sapphire said, poking him harshly in the ribs.
“Ow! Watch it! You have sharp claws!” Kimblee yelped.
From Sapphire's Redemption.
4/25/2010 c2 22Fallen Crystal Moon
NO! We can't live without EdxEnvy!
Ayume: =covering ears= Stop yelling in my ears!
22Fallen Crystal MoonNO! We can't live without EdxEnvy!
Ayume: =covering ears= Stop yelling in my ears!
4/23/2010 c1 6Ephere
Rawr. I have come to invade this fic.
I have a few things to say.
1) Aww! ^o^ I love the Edvy interaction. The Miles/Kimbley thing is fluff too.
2) Mei and Scar were a nice touch, although Mei's behaviour seems too scripted. Wouldn't she at least know that "sex" means gender in one sense? Why does she ask Envy? And why does Envy bother to explain so in-depth?
3) The interaction with Kimbley and Envy is nice.
4) Please update?
5) "Lure" is spelled as such. Lore means culture, as in folklore.
6EphereRawr. I have come to invade this fic.
I have a few things to say.
1) Aww! ^o^ I love the Edvy interaction. The Miles/Kimbley thing is fluff too.
2) Mei and Scar were a nice touch, although Mei's behaviour seems too scripted. Wouldn't she at least know that "sex" means gender in one sense? Why does she ask Envy? And why does Envy bother to explain so in-depth?
3) The interaction with Kimbley and Envy is nice.
4) Please update?
5) "Lure" is spelled as such. Lore means culture, as in folklore.
3/15/2010 c1 Actractivlyhideous
I love this! Its a pity that you might abandon such a good fic especially when its getting to the good part :s
In a hope that you might continue this is going to my favorites.3
sincerely yours
actractivlyhideous~
I love this! Its a pity that you might abandon such a good fic especially when its getting to the good part :s
In a hope that you might continue this is going to my favorites.3
sincerely yours
actractivlyhideous~
3/14/2010 c1 AmplifierPressandCo
Hi!
I just wanted to let you know how much I love this story! It's a refreshing plot. Unfourtunatly, too many people who post fanfics aren't very good writers, so it's really great to read something that isn't spelled with text speak or totally cliche'd. I really like what you've done with the characters too. You managed to incorporate your own little quirks, but you still stay true to the personalities. The fact that you used Mei and Miles and Scar is cool too. Not a lot of people do. The only thing was that I thought for the first chapter, things moved a little fast. It sounded more like this chapter could be a prolouge and you could back-track to before the cast was trapped in later chapters. Aw, but that's just me. I don't know how much you've written so I could be wrong. Anyway, I'm really looking foward to what you're planning. Keep up the good work!
Hi!
I just wanted to let you know how much I love this story! It's a refreshing plot. Unfourtunatly, too many people who post fanfics aren't very good writers, so it's really great to read something that isn't spelled with text speak or totally cliche'd. I really like what you've done with the characters too. You managed to incorporate your own little quirks, but you still stay true to the personalities. The fact that you used Mei and Miles and Scar is cool too. Not a lot of people do. The only thing was that I thought for the first chapter, things moved a little fast. It sounded more like this chapter could be a prolouge and you could back-track to before the cast was trapped in later chapters. Aw, but that's just me. I don't know how much you've written so I could be wrong. Anyway, I'm really looking foward to what you're planning. Keep up the good work!
3/13/2010 c2 18DragonFire44
Ah, and here I thought it was a new chapter. Well I'll pray that things get all sorted out.
18DragonFire44Ah, and here I thought it was a new chapter. Well I'll pray that things get all sorted out.
3/9/2010 c1 DragonFire44
Interesting! Funny too! Though how in the world did they all wind up in a cave togethor? Envy seems a little off but I suppose considering the situation it fits. I felt that Ed was thrusted to the side a lot. I don't see how Mei would ask Envy what 'sex' is? I would think she would ask Scar. I hope you update, I would love to read more.
Interesting! Funny too! Though how in the world did they all wind up in a cave togethor? Envy seems a little off but I suppose considering the situation it fits. I felt that Ed was thrusted to the side a lot. I don't see how Mei would ask Envy what 'sex' is? I would think she would ask Scar. I hope you update, I would love to read more.