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I don’t really get the whole I don’t have enough chakra point. Is he an Uzumaki or not, even without kyuubi he should have more chakra than anyone in village, plus it being dense as hell? Without his chakra constantly in fluctuation due to kyuubi he should be spamming jutsu all day long
I don’t really get the whole I don’t have enough chakra point. Is he an Uzumaki or not, even without kyuubi he should have more chakra than anyone in village, plus it being dense as hell? Without his chakra constantly in fluctuation due to kyuubi he should be spamming jutsu all day long
10/7 c27 fusin7447
Read this a few years ago and have found myself coming back to it time and again. Genuinely one of the best fanfictions I think I’ve ever read. Each character is so wonderfully realized, and I love Naruto’s arc. Hope you’re doing well and still writing, I’d love to get another chapter someday (or preferably 30)
Read this a few years ago and have found myself coming back to it time and again. Genuinely one of the best fanfictions I think I’ve ever read. Each character is so wonderfully realized, and I love Naruto’s arc. Hope you’re doing well and still writing, I’d love to get another chapter someday (or preferably 30)
7/27 c12 
2LordHades09
Did i just read two completely different stories? I mean, seriously? Look, you’re a fantastic writer and these fanfictions are yours to do with as you please, but here is some hopefully constructive critisism. Skipping 3? 5? Ish years of critical timeline and plot, that the entire first half of the story built up to through a timeskip and presenting a completely contrary MC with no warning is a jarring experience, and kills motivation to read.
2LordHades09Did i just read two completely different stories? I mean, seriously? Look, you’re a fantastic writer and these fanfictions are yours to do with as you please, but here is some hopefully constructive critisism. Skipping 3? 5? Ish years of critical timeline and plot, that the entire first half of the story built up to through a timeskip and presenting a completely contrary MC with no warning is a jarring experience, and kills motivation to read.
7/24 c1 Animeworld2.0
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7/7 c3 Sahamosveb
This is not a Naruto fanfic. It's an original that draws attention using a well-known fandom.
This is not a Naruto fanfic. It's an original that draws attention using a well-known fandom.
7/1 c1 DarkHunter10
Okay, now this one makes NO SENSE... How does naruto NOT know his father after being ALIVE for an ENTIRE year? The clan heads would know him.. Minato's FRIENDS would know him...Minato's enemies would have ALREADY known about him... Hiding him serves NO PURPOSE in this one! It shouldn't even be logically POSSIBLE in fact. Not to mention the only reason the fox could be pulled out of Kushina was because the seal was weakened by childbirth... This is definitely a "shaky start".
I just really have a TOUGH time believing this one... There was a FULL year that naruto was around AND minato and kushina were too... That changes A LOT! Not to mention that Minato was the hokage... EVERYONE would know naruto.. It would be logistically IMPOSSIBLE to hide him, (especially with the name NARUTO UZUMAKI... And his father would have introduced him AS "naruto"... This doesn't make the villagers seem dumb like canon does... This makes them BRAIN DEAD and ALL the ninja ENTIRELY too deaf and blind... It just doesn't work)
Third "secret war"? Um you DO realize these "ninjas" doing ANYTHING "secret" is kinda against everything about them... They are Loud.. They are "emotional", their jutsu reshape entire landscapes..Plus, make more noise then an aircraft carrier taking off... I don't see them doing ANYTHING "secret"... And if it's a BUNCH of them fighting? Ummm.. No.. "secret" should be nowhere in the name.
Okay, now this one makes NO SENSE... How does naruto NOT know his father after being ALIVE for an ENTIRE year? The clan heads would know him.. Minato's FRIENDS would know him...Minato's enemies would have ALREADY known about him... Hiding him serves NO PURPOSE in this one! It shouldn't even be logically POSSIBLE in fact. Not to mention the only reason the fox could be pulled out of Kushina was because the seal was weakened by childbirth... This is definitely a "shaky start".
I just really have a TOUGH time believing this one... There was a FULL year that naruto was around AND minato and kushina were too... That changes A LOT! Not to mention that Minato was the hokage... EVERYONE would know naruto.. It would be logistically IMPOSSIBLE to hide him, (especially with the name NARUTO UZUMAKI... And his father would have introduced him AS "naruto"... This doesn't make the villagers seem dumb like canon does... This makes them BRAIN DEAD and ALL the ninja ENTIRELY too deaf and blind... It just doesn't work)
Third "secret war"? Um you DO realize these "ninjas" doing ANYTHING "secret" is kinda against everything about them... They are Loud.. They are "emotional", their jutsu reshape entire landscapes..Plus, make more noise then an aircraft carrier taking off... I don't see them doing ANYTHING "secret"... And if it's a BUNCH of them fighting? Ummm.. No.. "secret" should be nowhere in the name.
6/26 c27 Tiger 6329
why do good fics always end up dead and the shitty harem fics get completed (sob...sob)
please continue babe don't turn on us like that after such a wonderful story
why do good fics always end up dead and the shitty harem fics get completed (sob...sob)
please continue babe don't turn on us like that after such a wonderful story
6/14 c23 Guest
Damn so Naruto is still on the weaker end for S ranks? He was just about to lose against Jiraiya as Jiraiya entered sage mode - he was getting destroyed actually - and he is already proven to be weaker than Itachi and Kisame. Naruto seems like he is around Deidara’s level because he really isn’t impressive. He got Jiraiya to go into sage mode but everyone knows Naruto was going to get destroyed, Tsunade saved him the embarrassment because NOTHING Naruto has would actually impact sage mode Jiraiya. Naruto should roughly be around Deidara/Kakashi/Gai level which is impressive but nothing incredible. I don’t know why he was trusted with the Orochimaru mission though, he is nowhere near strong enough to bring Orochimaru down. Orochimaru would eat Naruto for breakfast. I’d understand if Naruto had Kakashi and Gai as teammates but he has Ino and Sasuke instead…
Damn so Naruto is still on the weaker end for S ranks? He was just about to lose against Jiraiya as Jiraiya entered sage mode - he was getting destroyed actually - and he is already proven to be weaker than Itachi and Kisame. Naruto seems like he is around Deidara’s level because he really isn’t impressive. He got Jiraiya to go into sage mode but everyone knows Naruto was going to get destroyed, Tsunade saved him the embarrassment because NOTHING Naruto has would actually impact sage mode Jiraiya. Naruto should roughly be around Deidara/Kakashi/Gai level which is impressive but nothing incredible. I don’t know why he was trusted with the Orochimaru mission though, he is nowhere near strong enough to bring Orochimaru down. Orochimaru would eat Naruto for breakfast. I’d understand if Naruto had Kakashi and Gai as teammates but he has Ino and Sasuke instead…
4/29 c27 John
Incredible fanfic, I hope you come back one day, thanks for writing it.
Incredible fanfic, I hope you come back one day, thanks for writing it.