
10/24/2019 c17
2vampdreams
This was great!
I thought you rushed the last chapter a bit
But I love it all the same
Or maybe I just wasn't ready to let it go
Thanks for sharing!
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This was great!
I thought you rushed the last chapter a bit
But I love it all the same
Or maybe I just wasn't ready to let it go
Thanks for sharing!
_
10/18/2018 c3
223jacquisup
Me and my boyfriend took it really slow as just friends. As for school, my top class was ELA. I’m a bookworm like my mom. I started writing my own stories to when I was just sitting there. My family says I’d be a good writer, but I don’t know. You never know though.

Me and my boyfriend took it really slow as just friends. As for school, my top class was ELA. I’m a bookworm like my mom. I started writing my own stories to when I was just sitting there. My family says I’d be a good writer, but I don’t know. You never know though.
2/24/2018 c1 Guest
Good
Good
6/5/2016 c17 Mistress Mask
I like the story allot, but i believed you ended it to fast. Maybe write an extra chapter where Harry talked to the picture again. But it was a good idea about turning Tom into a baby
I like the story allot, but i believed you ended it to fast. Maybe write an extra chapter where Harry talked to the picture again. But it was a good idea about turning Tom into a baby
11/27/2015 c13 jjjjjjjj
i like this one
i like this one
11/27/2015 c12 jjjjjjjjj
better keep p*** out
better keep p*** out
11/27/2015 c11 jjjjjjjj
pervert jerk s** j*****
pervert jerk s** j*****
11/27/2015 c10 jjjjjjjj
salazar is behind this
salazar is behind this
11/27/2015 c9 jjjjjjjj
porno
porno
11/27/2015 c8 jjjjjjjj
again pornographic pervert nonsence
again pornographic pervert nonsence
11/27/2015 c7 jjjjjjjjj
i like longer
i like longer
11/27/2015 c6 jjjjjjjjjj
that is perverted
that is perverted
11/27/2015 c5 jjjjjjjjjjj
its good but can be beeter . who's the girl?
its good but can be beeter . who's the girl?
5/12/2015 c4
3White-Blackbird
You're missing several subjects that Harry took in his Sixth year. And if you remember canon, Ron never beat Down Dean or Michael Corner for dating Ginny. So he wouldn't ever beat his own best mate. Fanfic is annoyingly exaggerated and overdone.

You're missing several subjects that Harry took in his Sixth year. And if you remember canon, Ron never beat Down Dean or Michael Corner for dating Ginny. So he wouldn't ever beat his own best mate. Fanfic is annoyingly exaggerated and overdone.