for Secret Sex3/15/2010 c2 KManzie
Omg. I love this, please continue. Hope you update soon, though you just updated today lol. Can't wait!
Omg. I love this, please continue. Hope you update soon, though you just updated today lol. Can't wait!
3/15/2010 c2 
4PiedPiperOSIB
The first two chapters were...HOT! You have to continue this story! If this is any indication on what you have planned for the later chapters of ACE then by all means keep practicing (and I will forgive you for all of the emotional cliff hangers ACE has) Plus, I am dying to find out what the family thinks.
-Chris
4PiedPiperOSIBThe first two chapters were...HOT! You have to continue this story! If this is any indication on what you have planned for the later chapters of ACE then by all means keep practicing (and I will forgive you for all of the emotional cliff hangers ACE has) Plus, I am dying to find out what the family thinks.
-Chris
3/15/2010 c2 ColourmeCullen
Oh woman, that has to have been the most innocent, sensual, painfully beautiful, virginal scene I think I've ever read. So, so well written!
I love these two, and I think it'd be awesome if you continued this! 3
Oh woman, that has to have been the most innocent, sensual, painfully beautiful, virginal scene I think I've ever read. So, so well written!
I love these two, and I think it'd be awesome if you continued this! 3
3/15/2010 c2 Renee
This is great. Please keep going!
This is great. Please keep going!
3/15/2010 c1 ColourmeCullen
lmao - that was awesome. Loved that he got his even though she didn't - and great inspiration for ACE! ;)
lmao - that was awesome. Loved that he got his even though she didn't - and great inspiration for ACE! ;)
3/15/2010 c2 SabLuvsLogan
YAY! I love how your defining a o/s haha that was a great surprise alert, please pulease continue it..loving it! Fingers crossed for another update
~GGSophie
YAY! I love how your defining a o/s haha that was a great surprise alert, please pulease continue it..loving it! Fingers crossed for another update
~GGSophie
3/11/2010 c1 hayley
wow please update soon that was fantastic and very very hot !
wow please update soon that was fantastic and very very hot !
3/11/2010 c1 PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine
OMG, OMG THIS WAS THE BIGEST TURN IN A LONG WHILE SO HOT I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE SO WHEN DO YOU PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER I AM SURE I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE THAT WANTS IT NOW.
OMG, OMG THIS WAS THE BIGEST TURN IN A LONG WHILE SO HOT I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE SO WHEN DO YOU PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER I AM SURE I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE THAT WANTS IT NOW.
3/10/2010 c1 2loveybunnies
Oh honey, you don't have to practice - you've done a great job here! But if you feel you must hone your skills, I will not protest. I probably say this too much, but you need to write more of this - and by "this" I mean both this little story and the smut that goes along with it! I'm back to reading you on Twilighted because you never know when you might disappear but thought I'd comment since I was here.
I really love the part that goes..."As much as I needed my own release, I loved this woman in ways I had not even acknowledged to myself because the sheer depths of my emotions scared the shit out of me…I desperately wanted her to climax, she deserved it."
That's what gets me...the emotions behind the sex - and that will always be hotter than two people just screwing.
Oh honey, you don't have to practice - you've done a great job here! But if you feel you must hone your skills, I will not protest. I probably say this too much, but you need to write more of this - and by "this" I mean both this little story and the smut that goes along with it! I'm back to reading you on Twilighted because you never know when you might disappear but thought I'd comment since I was here.
I really love the part that goes..."As much as I needed my own release, I loved this woman in ways I had not even acknowledged to myself because the sheer depths of my emotions scared the shit out of me…I desperately wanted her to climax, she deserved it."
That's what gets me...the emotions behind the sex - and that will always be hotter than two people just screwing.
3/10/2010 c1 4natelaft
That was great..I'm glad she actually wears heels.Emmett is funny telling Edward what they know.Well if more update soon
That was great..I'm glad she actually wears heels.Emmett is funny telling Edward what they know.Well if more update soon