
9/2/2013 c2 Iolana
Interesting. I like how you imagined the scenes involving the fairy queen and the Indian woman... Although they are explained in the play, I always wondered what the full story was that actually happened to them. This is one possibility I guess.
Keep writing,
Iolana
Interesting. I like how you imagined the scenes involving the fairy queen and the Indian woman... Although they are explained in the play, I always wondered what the full story was that actually happened to them. This is one possibility I guess.
Keep writing,
Iolana
4/8/2011 c2 Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee
Good concept, but the emotion could be stronger and more intense.
Good concept, but the emotion could be stronger and more intense.
4/8/2011 c1 Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee
I'm glad you are writing Titania's relationship w/ her friend, but I doupt that the Indian woman was a servant to Titania. Titania described her as a very close friend, and I don't think mortals could be servants to fairies.
I'm glad you are writing Titania's relationship w/ her friend, but I doupt that the Indian woman was a servant to Titania. Titania described her as a very close friend, and I don't think mortals could be servants to fairies.
3/11/2010 c2 Paul
I never actually understood what was the deal with the kid...interesting theory about how he came to be and why Titania and Oberon were fighting so fiercely for him throughout the actual play.
I never actually understood what was the deal with the kid...interesting theory about how he came to be and why Titania and Oberon were fighting so fiercely for him throughout the actual play.