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1/22/2023 c1 harkie5
Great story! Thank you for sharing.
3/25/2016 c1 grandmachix
I love it and hate it. How sad if he had decided to go back only to have Rosalie inform him that it was too late. Well written. Judy
1/11/2016 c1 GeekMama Bee
" Bambi-sucking pussy!"
That has to be my new favorite line in this fandom.
Angel is a heartbreaking character and thank you so much for sharing this with us!
10/23/2015 c1 debslmac
12/27/2014 c1 Featherfreak
Interesting...I liked it.
12/7/2014 c1 TinaF
Loved it!
3/31/2013 c1 Pixie's Mama
What a unique little angel! It was so healing to just allow the tears to stream down my face reading this. Thank you, Betti.
7/9/2012 c1 Guest
Yeah, smack Rose silly, I really hated that she just jumped on that, she always hated Bella, she was lucky Bella decided to forgive her, even as she continued being a bitch. great read, very touching story with the angel, very sweet, thanks dear, Rachel
11/27/2011 c1 kinsano
Yeah, it's not as fun to destroy someone who's already destroyed. Much more fun to give someone hope first, then you can truly annihilate them. Seriously though, a very thought provoking story-I liked it and the message.
10/14/2011 c1 Rasa.Ra
Loved it! Great incite into Edwards darkest moments in NM.
6/25/2011 c1 Rita01tx
Dear Betti, I had read this story some time ago and neglected to leave you any love for it. Stumbled across it again today and vowed not to fail you this time. Thank you for giving Edward an angel to light his darkness, if only for a moment *wipes tears*.
5/17/2011 c1 mommymac0508
So sweet so sad I loved it thank you
5/9/2011 c1 InspiredByLemons

I've finally got round to reading one of your stories! Read this one while soaking in the bath this evening (risky, I know!) but I love the way you write, and really liked this little outtake of Edward's life in Rio during NM.

Well crafted - you display Edward's angst really well, and slide the story into SM's seamlessly.

Interesting concept, too!

Looking forward to reading more of your writing.

CC x
4/23/2011 c1 J.DRAST
Hello. This is a wonderful short-story! Amazing. Atfirst I thought the young woman was going to be okay, then she began to die before Edward's eyes, so quickly. But I was glad he stayed with her until the end, instead of just running away frantically, to escape the devistation in front of his eyes and in his mind. I'd think that Bella would've been proud of that. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
12/7/2010 c1 8GothicTemptress
"That's good. Yes good. Bad friend leaves. Good friend stays."

*shouts* Yeah! ;) Wisdom we all can use.

I'm tearing up at this wonderful story. That her smile remains at his last glance...profound Betti, so touching that despite the horror of the situation, this kind of purity of emotion remains on her corroded and disfigured, lifeless face - a smile of an Angel. *tearing up again*

I hope you had a wonderful weekend, and that you are well!

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