for One Year of Change11/3/2012 c2 
2ClearMortality
Hi there. I'd just like to wonder if this story is still on hiatus or if it was discontinued. It's really interesting and I would like to read more of it soon. To think that the story only has one chapter so far but I'm already bouncing on my seat just reading that single chapter! I'd just like to confirm one thing though.
It appears, that in your story, Shep is the branch leader. If that is so, I'd just like to ask whether Fiske (or the Man in Black) is also in this story. If ever you wrote it in chapter 1, then I'm so sorry but I think I missed it.
Now then, as many people would say "Update soon please!"
2ClearMortalityHi there. I'd just like to wonder if this story is still on hiatus or if it was discontinued. It's really interesting and I would like to read more of it soon. To think that the story only has one chapter so far but I'm already bouncing on my seat just reading that single chapter! I'd just like to confirm one thing though.
It appears, that in your story, Shep is the branch leader. If that is so, I'd just like to ask whether Fiske (or the Man in Black) is also in this story. If ever you wrote it in chapter 1, then I'm so sorry but I think I missed it.
Now then, as many people would say "Update soon please!"
5/28/2010 c1 2Morgan Le Fay98
Please update soon. This is really good. Will this be a Ian/Amy story? I hope it is!
2Morgan Le Fay98Please update soon. This is really good. Will this be a Ian/Amy story? I hope it is!
5/26/2010 c1 4dreamer773
I really like this and I hope you continue!
By the way, the thing used to start the Madrigal meeting ("Who are we?" "The descendants of Madeline Cahill!" "Why are we here?" "To learn her secrets and honor her name." and so on) is kinda familiar. Like in the Gallagher Girls series, in the welcome back dinner. :D
Anyways, I hope you do update soon!
4dreamer773I really like this and I hope you continue!
By the way, the thing used to start the Madrigal meeting ("Who are we?" "The descendants of Madeline Cahill!" "Why are we here?" "To learn her secrets and honor her name." and so on) is kinda familiar. Like in the Gallagher Girls series, in the welcome back dinner. :D
Anyways, I hope you do update soon!
3/21/2010 c1 InWayTooManyFandoms
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! OMG that was like the best chapter ever! (crowd claps and cheers)
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT! OMG that was like the best chapter ever! (crowd claps and cheers)
3/13/2010 c1 niccy924
OHEMGE! Please write more and more chapters! I love it! times ten plus a million times infinity! 3 3 3! you are a genius! PLEASE CONTINUE! YOU ARE AWEOSOME!
OHEMGE! Please write more and more chapters! I love it! times ten plus a million times infinity! 3 3 3! you are a genius! PLEASE CONTINUE! YOU ARE AWEOSOME!
3/13/2010 c1 whirl with the wind
Wowee. Your first.
I started out pretty recently myself, and I was told that my first was unbelivable, considering that it was my first fanfic.
YOU are unbelivable for a first. Ok? Just hope you know that.
Alrighty...
So, spelling and grammar. Of COURSE there are some mistakes, that is to be expected, considering how you've never done one before.
Ok- so PBG's review (you would recognize it as the review from psychoticbookgirl) pretty much sums up everything you need to know to successfully write the story. Keep her tips in mind- they're ussually right :)
Anyways...you shouldn't keep it as a one-shot...unless, of course, you don't have any idea where to take the story, and writing it will be a pain for all of us. However...I DOUBT that is a problem with you because the story is so...wow!
The uniforms are cute, I like them :) Sure, wearing uniform CAN be a pain but that one is so cute I can't resist liking them.
Good work! I hope that you can update soon!
Wowee. Your first.
I started out pretty recently myself, and I was told that my first was unbelivable, considering that it was my first fanfic.
YOU are unbelivable for a first. Ok? Just hope you know that.
Alrighty...
So, spelling and grammar. Of COURSE there are some mistakes, that is to be expected, considering how you've never done one before.
Ok- so PBG's review (you would recognize it as the review from psychoticbookgirl) pretty much sums up everything you need to know to successfully write the story. Keep her tips in mind- they're ussually right :)
Anyways...you shouldn't keep it as a one-shot...unless, of course, you don't have any idea where to take the story, and writing it will be a pain for all of us. However...I DOUBT that is a problem with you because the story is so...wow!
The uniforms are cute, I like them :) Sure, wearing uniform CAN be a pain but that one is so cute I can't resist liking them.
Good work! I hope that you can update soon!