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7/31/2010 c1 Simple Misconception
Heyy Janique (:

How's my twin doing?

yeah.

I'M STUPID. STUPID STUPID.

I should have reviewed ages and ages ago but i was too caught up in life.

sorry for being so selfish.

I remember me and Alice were laughing our butts off when we read this.

'Natsume looked away, hurt etched on his face.

Ayako.

His dead girlfriend.'

Alice: OMFG. YOU DATED NATSUME!

Me: O.O Whaa?

Alice: xD

Me: WTFFF I'M DEAD NOW? :'(

I miss the old days :\

How's everyone else doing?

How's my daughter and hubbie? :3

I know I'm away but its summer (:

Give me a 'holla soon! I miss you so darn much babe.

-Ayako
7/16/2010 c1 Animechicki
BEAUTIFULER MAGICALNESS! I LOVE IT!~
7/11/2010 c1 dark-witch27
nice one...

when will you update?
4/5/2010 c1 4Wisteria.Sinensis
Wow, this is an awesome story. Do update soon coz I'll really be waiting for it.
4/5/2010 c1 1Xim-no-writerX
i wonder kind of person ayako was?

i thought mikan would be stronger than that...

any way good chapter! hope you add a new chapter soon.

gambatte!(^_^)/
3/27/2010 c1 6Mademoiselle Mirage
WTF? JAN! WHY THE HELL DID YOU CALL ME A HORSE? AND AYAKO IS DEAD? D:

T.T You upset me.

- - -

Joking! xD So anyways, I love these lines:

"I am not a young lady. You might seem like a million years older than me, but I am far from being a young lady."

"… Let me rephrase that. Your ego astounds me, old lady."

She narrowed her eyes at him. "You imbecile!"

xD MADE MY DAY!
3/25/2010 c1 15DreamingReverie
It's very good. It felt like 'one of those good ol' days" hahaha. I can clearly picture out the surroundings and their movements.

What? Natsume HAD a gf? ola-la! hahaha. THIS is gonna be interesting. xD

Nicely done. Keep it up! :D
3/16/2010 c1 1Thou Failed Rapist
What kind of halfassed friend am I? I didn't even notice this was up!

The cowboy-esque/back in the day kind of talk was very different. I quote, "It's refreshing." It really is. Not my style, but it is.

And girl, you gotta get some old people to help you with this because are you sure there were cowboys back then in Japan? Japanese Howdys, that'll be funny.

And, if you don't mind me asking, where does YOUICHI fit into this? Because, honestly? I have yet to see your Youichi-OMG! side on here. And what's Ruka? And Hotaru?

Okay sorry I'm just stalling for my homework. Hush.
3/14/2010 c1 switch function
Finally!

I get to read the full version! 8D Woot!

Very nice, Jan. P8

I love Natsume's infamous line of this fic. 8]

Makes me laugh. 8D

Nyahahah!

So, sup? :]

I'll catch ya later. 8D

I'll be waiting for more. P:

-Chii
3/14/2010 c1 Guest
Very interesting~ good job! Keep it up!

I can't wait for more... XD
3/13/2010 c1 2Unique Yet Simple
Natsume, you sexist pig. I'm pretty sure if Mikan could have, she would've killed you when she had the chance XD

LOL But besides that I rather enjoyed the idea. Not very often do you find a story like this. I'm very interested on where you plan on taking it. Hope you update soon.
3/13/2010 c1 MariposaPurpleGarden
Good. at least its not Luna. i am usually not a huge western fan but this sounds really good cause westerns don't have much romance it is mostly fighting and guns.
3/13/2010 c1 RapidMaple3
i love you.I LOVE YOU SO DANM MUCH 4 MAKING THIS
3/13/2010 c1 17SonyaShulen
I definitely enjoyed that.

Something different and very a very Texas background, if you know what I mean, heh!
3/13/2010 c1 kristinemelody
This is a great start! :) I remember asking you if you read a certain book that led you to this story. :)) Anyways, nevermind that. Awesome chap! :) Can't wait for the 2nd one.

-potatoandtomato
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