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11/16/2010 c1 19Call me Mad
I inspired this? *grins* Cool.

Awesome story. Very well writen.
9/2/2010 c1 313Nightcrawlerlover
Neat! I like it. Very well-written, too.

That day in the Zoo was one of the most embarrassing days of his life so far, because Dudley Dursley never really got embarrassed. Ever.

But that day in the Zoo was the first moment he wished he could be in his cousin's shoes. He knew he deserved being behind that glass. He just knew it.

In short, Dudley Dursley knew full well that he was probably the worst cousin in Britain. But somewhere, deep down inside of him, he knew Harry must have forgiven him.

One thing's for sure, he thought, I'm never thinking again.

(I fixed the misspelling of "embarrassing" and "embarrassed" for you. :) I hope you don't mind.)

Keep up your awesome, super-cool, very brilliant and creative writing! :)
6/6/2010 c1 1meltedhappiness
Hmmm, this was cute in a way. I really liked the last sentence and the whole idea of the story was purty good!

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