for Night World, Second Generetion3/25/2013 c2 Guest
Cute ! ;) keep on writing
Cute ! ;) keep on writing
5/6/2010 c2 
2pepsi-Cola.StayGoldPony
omg i love it that is so funny, and ashton " better go take a cold shower" is lol. hm... are they soulmates. how old are they by the way?
2pepsi-Cola.StayGoldPonyomg i love it that is so funny, and ashton " better go take a cold shower" is lol. hm... are they soulmates. how old are they by the way?
3/16/2010 c1 1Fan-Fiction.net-Sucks-Ass
You have a good start! But I think you need to give us more details on what the charecters and scenery look like. Keep this up!
1Fan-Fiction.net-Sucks-AssYou have a good start! But I think you need to give us more details on what the charecters and scenery look like. Keep this up!
3/14/2010 c1 cxjiokdc
confusing!
confusing!