for Mischief Managed7/9/2010 c1 
44a walk on the w i l d side
I sorta like this pairing, but mainly after reading your last story on it :)
This is cute, but odd.
Good work,
CKC
44a walk on the w i l d sideI sorta like this pairing, but mainly after reading your last story on it :)
This is cute, but odd.
Good work,
CKC
4/17/2010 c1 1cafin8dsodaa
because you said "bitte":
i liked this. in my humble, RLSB-addicted opinion, there should be more of them "together" -suggestive grin-. however, i really like the way that their other meetings are hinted at, rather than told about. this is probably just my addiction to RLSB.
another one of my personal opinion things is the tense it's written in. i find it hard to read things that are written in present tense. however, again, that isn't any fault of yours, nor is it a bad thing. just different writing styles.
I really like the "mischief managed" thing. it made me smile.
over all: i likes.
side note: i am sorry if im not good at the review thing... i'm really new to this whole reviewing-peoples-work thing... i am really really sorry if i was just anoying and not helpful
1cafin8dsodaabecause you said "bitte":
i liked this. in my humble, RLSB-addicted opinion, there should be more of them "together" -suggestive grin-. however, i really like the way that their other meetings are hinted at, rather than told about. this is probably just my addiction to RLSB.
another one of my personal opinion things is the tense it's written in. i find it hard to read things that are written in present tense. however, again, that isn't any fault of yours, nor is it a bad thing. just different writing styles.
I really like the "mischief managed" thing. it made me smile.
over all: i likes.
side note: i am sorry if im not good at the review thing... i'm really new to this whole reviewing-peoples-work thing... i am really really sorry if i was just anoying and not helpful
4/9/2010 c1 13GOLD fish 945
I really liked this, it was cute, and clever.
Honestly, I almost didn't get the 'coming' joke at first, which made it even funnier when I reread it and figured out what was going on. :D Overall, it was great!
13GOLD fish 945I really liked this, it was cute, and clever.
Honestly, I almost didn't get the 'coming' joke at first, which made it even funnier when I reread it and figured out what was going on. :D Overall, it was great!
3/26/2010 c1 12WWT
Well, I for one loved it! It was short, but detailed enough to grab you and pull you in without taking away your audience's artistic liscence of dream.
12WWTWell, I for one loved it! It was short, but detailed enough to grab you and pull you in without taking away your audience's artistic liscence of dream.
3/14/2010 c1 enapets21
Lol! So devious of them...although the reactions of the other marauders would have been amusing had they been caught...
Lol! So devious of them...although the reactions of the other marauders would have been amusing had they been caught...
3/14/2010 c1 sharlie25
I really enjoyed this. The third person narrative was very well done and I thought that it was very amusing without being silly. Nicely done and I hope you keep writing!
I really enjoyed this. The third person narrative was very well done and I thought that it was very amusing without being silly. Nicely done and I hope you keep writing!