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8/7/2013 c1 LawlAdorkableTurtles
This is marvelous, really. It was well written and the take on the human Doctor's perspective was brilliantly done. Excellent job with this - I really enjoyed it :)
6/17/2013 c1 53KelseyO
"Haven't slept since the dawn of creation," he says impressively. "Didn't want to miss any more dawns that good." This line made me smile (after the moment it took for me to understand it; I'm still a bit tired, I guess? GET IT TOGETHER, KELSEY.)

"She leans over a vidscreen, and for a second he nearly expects her to whip out a pair of spectacles. (He tries not to be disappointed when she doesn't.)" becaus Oh my god the bit with them making out on the couch was the most precious thing I could read that over and over and over again

"Quite right, too" jfc

Leah, you need t .

(no)
9/6/2012 c1 Sourdoughtoast
This one is amazing as well. It definitely makes me feel, you know? And it's happy! What a concept.
7/29/2012 c1 zon12
Ok, I'm warning you .. you're gonna get a lot of reviews from me cause I just found your other Doctor/Rose stories and I am going through them with a smile on my face and a happy heart.

This is just amazing. The way you capture each Doctor incarnation, the way Rose just comes to life .. honestly, I am in love with this fic. Truly in love lol.
3/15/2012 c1 69one.twilight.sun
So cute. Adorable and loved it. Found the beginning part a little confusing but once we got to 10 and 10.5 it all straightened out.

She leans over a vidscreen, and for a second he nearly expects her to whip out a pair of spectacles. (He tries not to be disappointed when she doesn't.) - loved this line. So Doctor.
11/15/2011 c1 11Angela Jewell
So incredibly cute. Another great one! ;)
6/24/2011 c1 31MissFictionPrincess
Cute! :)

-Hailey
2/26/2011 c1 23bellefantastique
Loved this! Loved Rose being a BAMF in the office and hormonal!Doctor. :P
1/9/2011 c1 18Rose of Zakarisz
Awesome, wonderful, molto bene! I love the way that you write Rose and the Doctor.
9/3/2010 c1 33TheCurat0r
It seems Rose will always want the Doctor...whether she's human or dog. Lol. Another good one.
8/16/2010 c1 boymayorofsecondlife
So I loved the bit at the beginning, with your analysis of the Doctor's thoughts behind his actions in those episodes. Methinks 'twas perfectly in-character, and my goodness the sweetness of them sleeping together! X)

And then I loved the middle, with the Doctor just learning to cope with being human and all those insistant hormonal desires ;D Rose was absolutely fabulous in Torchwood; of course she'd never settle down as a housewife or anything.

"Rose Tyler: Defender of the Earth!" and all. (And oh my god, she'd look adorable in Tennant's spectacles! :3)

*AAAND*, I loved the end, with an adorkably awkward first attempt being interrupted by Rose the dog (and Jackie not far behind?). *And then more sweetness* aww...I adore how Rose mimicked him with the 'quite right' :) Didn't quite catch the reference you were making with "close enough", though -.- Must rewatch series 1-4 now...

What I didn't love was the lack of line breaks between the scenes, but that was probably due to FFNet's annoying habit of taking them out. DX
6/16/2010 c1 23Butterflygirl113
This is absolutely brilliant and adorable and wonderful and sweet and all sorts of positive, gushing adjectives! I haven't even seen that many episodes of Doctor Who, but I LOVE your writing of it. I noticed, while reading, that your writing flows so smoothly and fluidly, and had the rather fanciful thought that it's MUSICAL. I don't know how text can be musical, but you've managed it, and it's beautiful and awe-inspiring to read. Just gorgeous; like the words are singing to you. Thank you so much for writing!
3/15/2010 c1 131lauraxtennant
Lovely :)I love the bit where he tries to get her to stop laughing at him
3/14/2010 c1 1AKA Hummer
Utterly lovely and sweet. I love your Doctor Who fics!

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