1/5/2013 c6 Cheetha Suno
This story is great. Keep writing fanfiction!
This story is great. Keep writing fanfiction!
9/11/2012 c6 PhantomGirl14
The whole thing was way to rushed. I'm not trying to be mean just telling u my opionion... but otherwise add more detail and things and it will makenthis more interesting :)
Good job thou :)
The whole thing was way to rushed. I'm not trying to be mean just telling u my opionion... but otherwise add more detail and things and it will makenthis more interesting :)
Good job thou :)
9/11/2012 c2 PhantomGirl14
I dontnthink Max wouldnwarm up to him that fast :/ but other then that I like it so far :)
I dontnthink Max wouldnwarm up to him that fast :/ but other then that I like it so far :)
8/28/2012 c6 Guest
sequel!
- koyboy
sequel!
- koyboy
8/29/2011 c6 11Queen NekoChan
This was much too short. Are you planning on making a sequel? You better be, cause this story was freaking AWESOME!
This was much too short. Are you planning on making a sequel? You better be, cause this story was freaking AWESOME!
8/29/2011 c3 Queen NekoChan
Er... I really don't think that Danny would reveal his secret so readily. He'd rather think of a lame excuse than do that (i.e "I tend to run into stuff a lot.") Other than that, this is good :)
Er... I really don't think that Danny would reveal his secret so readily. He'd rather think of a lame excuse than do that (i.e "I tend to run into stuff a lot.") Other than that, this is good :)