for The Darkest of Nights9/30/2013 c3 Secret Fantasy Reader
why stop writing it is very good if can please finish it is very good
why stop writing it is very good if can please finish it is very good
2/24/2013 c3 
9selenopheliac
Hey...what the...Hey...hunny...there...isn't any more...this that? How could u?! How DARE u?!...Ok...I admit it...I'm not actually angry but...seriously...there should be more...like...a lot more...like...NOW...XD
9selenopheliacHey...what the...Hey...hunny...there...isn't any more...this that? How could u?! How DARE u?!...Ok...I admit it...I'm not actually angry but...seriously...there should be more...like...a lot more...like...NOW...XD
1/29/2013 c3 20kage kitsune 14
"...sounded like fun to me."
I didn't take her as the kind of person to have that type of fun...
Great story. Update soon.
20kage kitsune 14"...sounded like fun to me."
I didn't take her as the kind of person to have that type of fun...
Great story. Update soon.
7/19/2010 c3 Pink Tubby Custard
Great story so far :3 These stories always make my hate towards Johns ever worse and now I absolutely 100% hate him. - Lol, update soon please :3 I can't wait to read more about Raion.
Great story so far :3 These stories always make my hate towards Johns ever worse and now I absolutely 100% hate him. - Lol, update soon please :3 I can't wait to read more about Raion.
6/19/2010 c3 Stabbythings
XD I love the skull f&ck line at the end there great story I like is so far.
XD I love the skull f&ck line at the end there great story I like is so far.
6/2/2010 c3 1marian93
So... Turow, huh?
That was interesting.
What's with that name? What does it have to do with Riddick...?
I love this (yeah, because my previous review never mentioned it or anything) and it just keeps getting better.
Awesome chapter.
Oh, and a CoR sequel? I didn't know, and it pretty much made my day. Thanks for sharing. :)
1marian93So... Turow, huh?
That was interesting.
What's with that name? What does it have to do with Riddick...?
I love this (yeah, because my previous review never mentioned it or anything) and it just keeps getting better.
Awesome chapter.
Oh, and a CoR sequel? I didn't know, and it pretty much made my day. Thanks for sharing. :)
6/2/2010 c2 marian93
This is SO COOL! I love your OC, I love Riddick in this, I love the way you write and the twists and everything about this so far.
I especially LOVE the ending of this chapter. It was just so badass. I loved it!
Ok, I'll stop blabbering like a crazy person and go read the 3rd chapter and then blabber some more in the next review. :]
Subscribed and favorited :)
This is SO COOL! I love your OC, I love Riddick in this, I love the way you write and the twists and everything about this so far.
I especially LOVE the ending of this chapter. It was just so badass. I loved it!
Ok, I'll stop blabbering like a crazy person and go read the 3rd chapter and then blabber some more in the next review. :]
Subscribed and favorited :)
6/2/2010 c3 5DarkDreamer1982
I have heard that a new Riddick movie is coming out, and I can't wait! And, as always, another awesome chapter! Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next one!
5DarkDreamer1982I have heard that a new Riddick movie is coming out, and I can't wait! And, as always, another awesome chapter! Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next one!
6/2/2010 c3 3Dreaming Dragonfly
Wow, look who is on a roll? Likin' how close you kept to the script, though i think it would have been nice to deviate a little. Still, i adored your line;
'What, did he forget his tooth brush?'
Totally tickled me. Next ch. coming soon? ;)
3Dreaming DragonflyWow, look who is on a roll? Likin' how close you kept to the script, though i think it would have been nice to deviate a little. Still, i adored your line;
'What, did he forget his tooth brush?'
Totally tickled me. Next ch. coming soon? ;)
5/31/2010 c2 Dreaming Dragonfly
Updates? Yay!
I really liked this chapter, especially how 'real' your main character came across. Riddick was good too, especially when he was tempted to leave her behind - true to form i'm sure! He can be quite selfish and i think it'll be interesting to see this grow and change. What d'ya reckon?
Good job. Looking forward to the update! ;)
Updates? Yay!
I really liked this chapter, especially how 'real' your main character came across. Riddick was good too, especially when he was tempted to leave her behind - true to form i'm sure! He can be quite selfish and i think it'll be interesting to see this grow and change. What d'ya reckon?
Good job. Looking forward to the update! ;)