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5/19/2017 c1 73UndoubtedlyTheWine
This is nice
3/25/2012 c1 Corner Mouse
Meh, I'm not a big fan of stories that add more mental lard to a certain scene, but whatever. This was pretty decent.

I agree with saying Max giving Esther an "evil" glare doesn't make sense. Esther's glare is more evil than anything I've ever known.

In all honesty, I thought that there would be some Daniel/Esther in this story, but I'm too sick for my own good so it's not your fault.

Pretty decent story. Well-done. :)
6/10/2010 c1 d
Great job, the only thing I didn't like was Max giving Esther an "evil glare." Wasn't she just hurt and betrayed that her new sister was trying to murder her brother?
6/1/2010 c1 10Swashbucklist
Hmmm, yeah that's pretty much what happened in the movie. Thanks for reminding me. :)
5/15/2010 c1 Kool
Like it! :)
3/25/2010 c1 6DeadXClown
nice little story there :)

thanks for adding me to your favourites and alerts by the way!

i hope u enjoy my Orphan story :)

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