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1/27/2018 c1 Blandy8521
... this is badly rushed
11/26/2017 c2 Blandy8521
Question: why would Naruto want the scroll
11/26/2017 c5 Blandy8521
Ok I'll be honest after reading this, while far better than mine, is still bad due to the pace at the start it doesn't explain why he was neglected, kyuubi presumably, but to anyone that doesn't know the narutoverse well it's unclear at best so while far better than mine, which I have deleted due to hoe bad I felt it was, it has pacing issues and you need to know the Narutoverse well to understand what's happening. Finally you didn't explain how Minato survived I'm currently assuming either the 3rd (don't remember how to spell his name) did the sealing or Minato used a different seal

Sorry if you think this is a flame it's not meant to be it's just problems I noticed
4/2/2016 c2 Guest
I'm sorry but your c gramer. Sucks badly
5/29/2015 c1 Guest
Poordialogue. The dialogue does even look on!
9/21/2014 c5 eiin
WHAT THE FUCK DO U MEAN UR JUST FUCKING LAZY STOP MAKING EXCUSSES
7/2/2014 c5 strabimonx
Nice
6/13/2014 c5 mike finn
MAKE SURE NARUTO HAS A SISTER
6/9/2014 c5 Jacob
Can you make more chapters I love this story please It's really good . I am one of your biggest fan
4/18/2014 c5 KH Fan
Not Bad. Also I like the idea of having Sasuke trying to bring Naruto back to Konoha. Sounds intresting.
4/18/2014 c5 Naru Fan
This seems good. I would like to see more of it.
4/15/2014 c1 Guest
Lame
1/27/2014 c5 dragonlover332
I loving what you are doing so far in the story. All the stories that I read they make Naruto forgive them so why not make Naruto start his own clan away from them and be his own person. I think that will be cool to see in a story like yours.
1/27/2014 c4 bankai777
i wonder what minato found that scared him.
1/27/2014 c2 bankai777
minato better pray for a quick death.
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