
10/10/2010 c1
2Dicen
PLEASE, PLEASE! YOU LIKE HAVENT UPDATED IN TEN MONTHS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I LOVE YOUR STTORY!

PLEASE, PLEASE! YOU LIKE HAVENT UPDATED IN TEN MONTHS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I LOVE YOUR STTORY!
9/6/2010 c1
1supertwilightfan
oooooooo sounds like its going to get real good soon. cant wait to read more. thanks

oooooooo sounds like its going to get real good soon. cant wait to read more. thanks
7/28/2010 c1
8Tigger77
I'd love to see how this goes on. You should work on the flow of the story. But that's something most people need to.
Still I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I'd love to see how this goes on. You should work on the flow of the story. But that's something most people need to.
Still I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!
4/21/2010 c1
1cheatedwithmy360
when are you going to update? if you do can you bring edward in and make it longer? it sounds really good from the summery and the prologue. update soon please :)

when are you going to update? if you do can you bring edward in and make it longer? it sounds really good from the summery and the prologue. update soon please :)