for Coincidences10/31/2011 c1 
10SunsetJello394
Magatha darling, I love your writing style. I want to drink it all up so that maybe I would absorb some of your talent.
You rock my socks!
10SunsetJello394Magatha darling, I love your writing style. I want to drink it all up so that maybe I would absorb some of your talent.
You rock my socks!
3/19/2010 c1 DFGHJKKJHGD
Oh. My. God. THIS WAS AMAZING. You are such a good writer, I feel like you should have way more reviews. You captured all of the characters really well. Keep writing! I'm gonna go look at your other stories. :) And I'm putting this one on alert... just in case...
Oh. My. God. THIS WAS AMAZING. You are such a good writer, I feel like you should have way more reviews. You captured all of the characters really well. Keep writing! I'm gonna go look at your other stories. :) And I'm putting this one on alert... just in case...
3/18/2010 c1 Sky Spirit
All I can say is WOW that was really good. I love, love, love that you can see (and accept) that there was SOME point in Fang leaving- he had his reasons and they were pretty legit. You managed to convey that and, well, the fact that maybe he WAS a little stupid to take off like that. But the fact that you ended it without him rushing back to Max and sticking to his mission earns you my respect at least :)
Good job with emotions; I really liked the interaction between Fang and Ella- it's interesting, putting those two together :)
All in all, amazing job!
All I can say is WOW that was really good. I love, love, love that you can see (and accept) that there was SOME point in Fang leaving- he had his reasons and they were pretty legit. You managed to convey that and, well, the fact that maybe he WAS a little stupid to take off like that. But the fact that you ended it without him rushing back to Max and sticking to his mission earns you my respect at least :)
Good job with emotions; I really liked the interaction between Fang and Ella- it's interesting, putting those two together :)
All in all, amazing job!