for Bring Me To Life2/27/2015 c1 Guest
I read it while listening to the song and God! It really got into did a decent job!Well done!
P.S.I read it because you had written it.I really don't like update your other story,"Naruto vs Sasuke: The Aftermath".
I read it while listening to the song and God! It really got into did a decent job!Well done!
P.S.I read it because you had written it.I really don't like update your other story,"Naruto vs Sasuke: The Aftermath".
7/31/2014 c1 Guest
Yhat was the moment when Ichigo got right back up as a Vasto Lorde HollowZangetsu and kicked the Espada's Ass.
Yhat was the moment when Ichigo got right back up as a Vasto Lorde HollowZangetsu and kicked the Espada's Ass.
12/7/2013 c1 Guest
Snifff. Do you know hinata and orohime have the same english acteress
Snifff. Do you know hinata and orohime have the same english acteress
12/7/2013 c1 Guest
Tragic. I beilieve Orihime is a descendant of Naruto and Hinata.
Tragic. I beilieve Orihime is a descendant of Naruto and Hinata.
9/28/2013 c1 
3DarkSiren49
Your story is in violation of the following Guideline Rule.
Actions Not Allowed #3 Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.
Your story can be reported for this violations unless it complies to the Guideline Rules (meaning take out the copyrighted lyrics). You could ignore and leave it for the admins to deal with, but I remind you that your account can be suspended for any rule broken.
DarkSiren49
-Critics United
3DarkSiren49Your story is in violation of the following Guideline Rule.
Actions Not Allowed #3 Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.
Your story can be reported for this violations unless it complies to the Guideline Rules (meaning take out the copyrighted lyrics). You could ignore and leave it for the admins to deal with, but I remind you that your account can be suspended for any rule broken.
DarkSiren49
-Critics United
9/21/2013 c1 Dalton Wolfe
Beautiful. I truly hope that you continue to write more song fics. I apologize for not reading it sooner.
Beautiful. I truly hope that you continue to write more song fics. I apologize for not reading it sooner.
6/2/2011 c1 10Rictor Yagami
I decided to check out this song fic and I can't believe you
killed Ichigo and the others. Its kind of depressing.
I was wondering if your personal message was updated like mine
was? I don't know how it happend but mine just got updated by
itself. Just thought I let you know.
10Rictor YagamiI decided to check out this song fic and I can't believe you
killed Ichigo and the others. Its kind of depressing.
I was wondering if your personal message was updated like mine
was? I don't know how it happend but mine just got updated by
itself. Just thought I let you know.
3/7/2011 c1 Sage Naruto25
That was really good. You actually had me crying at the end. So real good job on that. Btw, update soon with your other fic, "Naruto V.S.Sasuke The Aftermath." Til next time, Sage Naruto25
That was really good. You actually had me crying at the end. So real good job on that. Btw, update soon with your other fic, "Naruto V.S.Sasuke The Aftermath." Til next time, Sage Naruto25
1/20/2011 c1 LadyDeath09
My correction: when I said this ain't a foothold what I really meant to say is: this ain't a good story {which it is so back off those who don't like the story and song!} cuz Their's people even me that love both of them. Keep writing more stories like these kingKakashi!
My correction: when I said this ain't a foothold what I really meant to say is: this ain't a good story {which it is so back off those who don't like the story and song!} cuz Their's people even me that love both of them. Keep writing more stories like these kingKakashi!
1/20/2011 c1 LadyDeath09
My correction: when I said this ain't foothold what I really meant to say is: this ain't a good story {which it is, so back off!}
My correction: when I said this ain't foothold what I really meant to say is: this ain't a good story {which it is, so back off!}
1/20/2011 c1 LadyDeath09
WHAT THE HELL? Ichigo can't die! Orihime loves him, Ichigo better come back to life he's my favorite character!. I love the song me bring me to life, listin all u people that r sayin: that this aint foothold and u have seen worse, that writing song fics r hard and etc. . . Than back off, cuz some people love the song that dies fit with the story and we love both the story and the song. Make more stories like these cuz we love it!
WHAT THE HELL? Ichigo can't die! Orihime loves him, Ichigo better come back to life he's my favorite character!. I love the song me bring me to life, listin all u people that r sayin: that this aint foothold and u have seen worse, that writing song fics r hard and etc. . . Than back off, cuz some people love the song that dies fit with the story and we love both the story and the song. Make more stories like these cuz we love it!
6/15/2010 c1 2Joshua Ruehadan
Im not sure i like songfics on principle but i do like it when i know the song... I dont know if your looking for a critique there could have been more original writing coupled with the song. One more little nitpick the A/N is as big as the fic.
2Joshua RuehadanIm not sure i like songfics on principle but i do like it when i know the song... I dont know if your looking for a critique there could have been more original writing coupled with the song. One more little nitpick the A/N is as big as the fic.