for Model Unknown6/24/2012 c2 Moonmyth26
It's a freedom of speech issue. These stories are the same as romance novels, u don't see bookstores getting rid of the romance section simply because a parent finally clued into what their child has been reading. Stop violating my first amendment rights!
It's a freedom of speech issue. These stories are the same as romance novels, u don't see bookstores getting rid of the romance section simply because a parent finally clued into what their child has been reading. Stop violating my first amendment rights!
7/12/2011 c1 
2SailorMoonAddict
This is AMAZING DONT REWRITE IT, ITS GREAT THE WAY IT IS AND PLEASE CONTINUE AND WHY CAN'T SHE DATE GUYS AND DO cheerleading? PLEASE CONTINUE AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY!
2SailorMoonAddictThis is AMAZING DONT REWRITE IT, ITS GREAT THE WAY IT IS AND PLEASE CONTINUE AND WHY CAN'T SHE DATE GUYS AND DO cheerleading? PLEASE CONTINUE AND GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY!
5/23/2011 c1 11TropicalRemix
nice first chapter. How did serenity's parents die? I hope she meets mamoru soon. There first meeting should be fun.
11TropicalRemixnice first chapter. How did serenity's parents die? I hope she meets mamoru soon. There first meeting should be fun.
5/2/2011 c3 Taylor
NO DONT REWRITE! it sounds really great so far! Hahaa just go ahead and write it! I really wanna know what happens next :)
NO DONT REWRITE! it sounds really great so far! Hahaa just go ahead and write it! I really wanna know what happens next :)
2/12/2011 c3 SapphireHottie
Ok, so I've read one chapter and I think this is an amazing plot. I totally get what you mean with the college getting in the way but hey, everybody has a social life. I don't think you should rewrite your chapters. I mean, they got you this far, why change it? Just do better on your next chapters. Update when you can! :D
Ok, so I've read one chapter and I think this is an amazing plot. I totally get what you mean with the college getting in the way but hey, everybody has a social life. I don't think you should rewrite your chapters. I mean, they got you this far, why change it? Just do better on your next chapters. Update when you can! :D
2/11/2011 c3 11TropicalRemix
i don't see anything wrong with your story. you should continue it. Is serena going to meet darien when she moves to California?
11TropicalRemixi don't see anything wrong with your story. you should continue it. Is serena going to meet darien when she moves to California?
3/20/2010 c1 10SailorMoon489
OMG I LOVE IT! really good first chapter! can't wait for the next : )
~SailorMoon489
10SailorMoon489OMG I LOVE IT! really good first chapter! can't wait for the next : )
~SailorMoon489