for Pillar of Strength8/3/2011 c1 
2s'he-who-seeks-inspiration
Your fic is good, they were still in character and I like the fact that the plot is not cheesy like other stories. I love 5986 than 8086, but this fic makes me think otherwise
2s'he-who-seeks-inspirationYour fic is good, they were still in character and I like the fact that the plot is not cheesy like other stories. I love 5986 than 8086, but this fic makes me think otherwise
6/10/2011 c1 1achromaticly
It's beautiful
I really like the way you potray the characters, especially Haru. She is so... human-ly (is that even a word?) and I like the fact that Haru cares for Yamamoto more than she cares for Tsuna(She deserves a good man who think of her as much as she thinks of him). What made me squealed in the end was the last line:
"I think that Haru's really strong, too."
It's just a perfect way to end a story. Thanks for writing this, It really cheered me up :)
1achromaticlyIt's beautiful
I really like the way you potray the characters, especially Haru. She is so... human-ly (is that even a word?) and I like the fact that Haru cares for Yamamoto more than she cares for Tsuna(She deserves a good man who think of her as much as she thinks of him). What made me squealed in the end was the last line:
"I think that Haru's really strong, too."
It's just a perfect way to end a story. Thanks for writing this, It really cheered me up :)
11/17/2010 c1 17N. Mandy
Aww~~ So cute! *-*
Really, Yamamoto and Haru deserve each other, right? hehe x3
Good job! (;
+Favs :D
17N. MandyAww~~ So cute! *-*
Really, Yamamoto and Haru deserve each other, right? hehe x3
Good job! (;
+Favs :D
4/1/2010 c1 eyeglasses-kun
Fantastic story you have here! I enjoyed this immensely. It's satisfying to know that they drew strength from each other. I'm looking forward to more of your stories!
Fantastic story you have here! I enjoyed this immensely. It's satisfying to know that they drew strength from each other. I'm looking forward to more of your stories!
3/31/2010 c1 8Ephereal
This is fantastic in all ways possible ;; The last few lines in particular, hit me right in the gut! So great. Really.
8EpherealThis is fantastic in all ways possible ;; The last few lines in particular, hit me right in the gut! So great. Really.
3/27/2010 c1 6UlquiorraNoKokoro
I was reading the author's note at the end, and I was wondering... what does 8086 mean? And 5986? I don't get what those numbers mean...
6UlquiorraNoKokoroI was reading the author's note at the end, and I was wondering... what does 8086 mean? And 5986? I don't get what those numbers mean...
3/24/2010 c1 Anonymous Reviewer
I think you were able to capture Haru's thoughts pretty well. The depth of her character made her seem real and come out of the story itself. Yamamoto and Haru's interactions were natural and the dialogue spot on, which made them both in-character. The subtlety and gradual build of their interactions made the last scene have more impact. Moreover, Yamamoto's awareness of Haru's location makes me think that Haru wasn't the only one watching from the sidelines all along. Regarding your grammar, I don't think there's much to comment on since there aren't any notable errors. Well, I hope this helped! Thanks for the great story.
I think you were able to capture Haru's thoughts pretty well. The depth of her character made her seem real and come out of the story itself. Yamamoto and Haru's interactions were natural and the dialogue spot on, which made them both in-character. The subtlety and gradual build of their interactions made the last scene have more impact. Moreover, Yamamoto's awareness of Haru's location makes me think that Haru wasn't the only one watching from the sidelines all along. Regarding your grammar, I don't think there's much to comment on since there aren't any notable errors. Well, I hope this helped! Thanks for the great story.
3/24/2010 c1 Sweet Remembrance
I agree, Haru is really strong, too! It must have been hard for Kyoko the first time they were in the future, so I'm glad that Yamamoto was sort of her 'source of strength' in this one. They're so similar and refreshing! Oh, and they were both in-character. Good job on your first YamaHaru! Make more!
I agree, Haru is really strong, too! It must have been hard for Kyoko the first time they were in the future, so I'm glad that Yamamoto was sort of her 'source of strength' in this one. They're so similar and refreshing! Oh, and they were both in-character. Good job on your first YamaHaru! Make more!
3/24/2010 c1 20bells-mannequin
i really don't unterstand why Tsuna didn't tell the girls at the beginning. i mean, he's not that stupid, he did know very well how uncomfortable they were, didn't he?
Well, anyways: i like your fanfic. i like your description of haru and yamamoto and how she thinks more about yamamoto than about her tsuna-san. i really like 2786-but i can see 8086 as well with all the similarities.
hope you write more of this stuff.
greets,
bells
20bells-mannequini really don't unterstand why Tsuna didn't tell the girls at the beginning. i mean, he's not that stupid, he did know very well how uncomfortable they were, didn't he?
Well, anyways: i like your fanfic. i like your description of haru and yamamoto and how she thinks more about yamamoto than about her tsuna-san. i really like 2786-but i can see 8086 as well with all the similarities.
hope you write more of this stuff.
greets,
bells
3/23/2010 c1 3kim-shi
Wow. For a first-time writer of an 8086 fic, you did a great job! I love the subtlety of their growing relationship and the way you emphasize/describe their smiles... about the cake... All in all, wonderful. Looking forward to more of your stories! :)
3kim-shiWow. For a first-time writer of an 8086 fic, you did a great job! I love the subtlety of their growing relationship and the way you emphasize/describe their smiles... about the cake... All in all, wonderful. Looking forward to more of your stories! :)
3/23/2010 c1 71great gospel
An excellent portrayal of both Haru and Yamamoto. I like the way you described each of those smiles, for some reason. :) Keep up the good work, and I hope to see some more 8086 from you soon.
Sora (:
71great gospelAn excellent portrayal of both Haru and Yamamoto. I like the way you described each of those smiles, for some reason. :) Keep up the good work, and I hope to see some more 8086 from you soon.
Sora (:
3/23/2010 c1 77xxkoffeexx
Aw. What more proof do we need that Yamamoto and Haru are MADE for each other? They are each other's pillar of strength, smiling, smiling, and smiling. I love the cake parts. M. :)
77xxkoffeexxAw. What more proof do we need that Yamamoto and Haru are MADE for each other? They are each other's pillar of strength, smiling, smiling, and smiling. I love the cake parts. M. :)