for Losing Control10/26/2023 c5 Kira
Damn man, this Lillah is utterly pathetic. If I were her I'd never give this fucktard Embry the time of the day.
Damn man, this Lillah is utterly pathetic. If I were her I'd never give this fucktard Embry the time of the day.
6/7/2023 c1 Guest
I've read this story several times. I couldnt get enough. I love Embry, but moreover I LOVE Lillah.
I have one or two critiques, though. The friends with benefits stuff was a little bit disturbing, and she forgave him so easily. I was secretly hoping that she was gonna give him some hard time once she learnt everything.
And if I were you, I would have written an alternate ending where Lillah got angry and phased :) (Come on, it's obvious her father has the wolf gene!) Of course she and Embry gonna be together and live happily ever after eventually. They truly belong together.
Thanks for this amazing story.
I've read this story several times. I couldnt get enough. I love Embry, but moreover I LOVE Lillah.
I have one or two critiques, though. The friends with benefits stuff was a little bit disturbing, and she forgave him so easily. I was secretly hoping that she was gonna give him some hard time once she learnt everything.
And if I were you, I would have written an alternate ending where Lillah got angry and phased :) (Come on, it's obvious her father has the wolf gene!) Of course she and Embry gonna be together and live happily ever after eventually. They truly belong together.
Thanks for this amazing story.
11/14/2022 c36 Nimu
Well,story is good, but didn't like Lillah at all, she's such a pathetic weak-ass character.(mentally weak). And I really didn't like how she agreed to that friends with benefits proposal of Embry. (No offense, but I'm entitle to my own opinion and I find the whole friends with benefits thing is utterly disgusting and disgraceful.) Couldn't believe that shed stoop this low. I didn't like Embry either, a f****** idiot who can't stick to one decision.
Well,story is good, but didn't like Lillah at all, she's such a pathetic weak-ass character.(mentally weak). And I really didn't like how she agreed to that friends with benefits proposal of Embry. (No offense, but I'm entitle to my own opinion and I find the whole friends with benefits thing is utterly disgusting and disgraceful.) Couldn't believe that shed stoop this low. I didn't like Embry either, a f****** idiot who can't stick to one decision.
1/8/2021 c1 Guest
This story has not aged well at all... read this when I was 15 and loved it, come back as an adult and I’m cringing... so sexist.
All the pack men have sex with multiple girls before but the imprints HAVE to all be virgins? Gross.
Embry marking lilah on purpose to protect her from teenagers? And she’s totally ok with that once he says how insecure he is. Gaslighting. Gross.
Won’t have sex with her but will do everything else? Nope.
The absolute obsession with babies like the women are baby makers rather than actual women and partners. Nice...
A grown woman calling her dad ‘daddy’ ... cringe.
Authors writing style is really good but for any teenage girls reading it... this isn’t how relationships should be or are, fanfic world or real.
This story has not aged well at all... read this when I was 15 and loved it, come back as an adult and I’m cringing... so sexist.
All the pack men have sex with multiple girls before but the imprints HAVE to all be virgins? Gross.
Embry marking lilah on purpose to protect her from teenagers? And she’s totally ok with that once he says how insecure he is. Gaslighting. Gross.
Won’t have sex with her but will do everything else? Nope.
The absolute obsession with babies like the women are baby makers rather than actual women and partners. Nice...
A grown woman calling her dad ‘daddy’ ... cringe.
Authors writing style is really good but for any teenage girls reading it... this isn’t how relationships should be or are, fanfic world or real.
12/2/2020 c42 Guest
This was such a cute story and well written
This was such a cute story and well written
11/22/2019 c1 
12Cassy-Kay
Hi NKW :)
I just reread this story over the past week for probably the third or fourth time. Just wanted to let you know how much I love it.
I hope you’re doing well and that you find some inspiration for Drawn to You.
If you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of or talk to, I’m here! I’m recently trying to finish some of my twilight Fics after a few years hiatus :)
Have a wonderful thanksgiving!
Cassandra
12Cassy-KayHi NKW :)
I just reread this story over the past week for probably the third or fourth time. Just wanted to let you know how much I love it.
I hope you’re doing well and that you find some inspiration for Drawn to You.
If you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of or talk to, I’m here! I’m recently trying to finish some of my twilight Fics after a few years hiatus :)
Have a wonderful thanksgiving!
Cassandra
8/27/2019 c6 Guest
I feel like Embry cheated.
I feel like Embry cheated.
8/28/2018 c32 shamcaster
This story turns me on so fucking I gotta tell you this Lillah girl is so pathetic just like Bella Swan.I mean this whole "friendship" thing makes her look like a 't she have any guts to ask Embry about the meaning of this relationship? Such a fucking stupid girl.
This story turns me on so fucking I gotta tell you this Lillah girl is so pathetic just like Bella Swan.I mean this whole "friendship" thing makes her look like a 't she have any guts to ask Embry about the meaning of this relationship? Such a fucking stupid girl.
8/21/2018 c19 shamcaster
This story is this friendship is kinda disgusting and fucked up.
This story is this friendship is kinda disgusting and fucked up.
8/21/2018 c36 CamiBR
You are a wonderful writer.
You are a wonderful writer.
8/21/2018 c14 shamcaster
What the fuck is wrong with this dumb fucking asshole? How can he fucking reject such a sweet girl? If I were Lillah I would tell him to stuff that fucking friendship up his ass!
What the fuck is wrong with this dumb fucking asshole? How can he fucking reject such a sweet girl? If I were Lillah I would tell him to stuff that fucking friendship up his ass!