for The Blizzard3/25/2010 c3 TemporaryFix
*Hug* I love this story, you write beautifully. I read up to chapter 2 in math class and I was pretty much in tears when I read he had left in BPov. I can't wait for more!
*Hug* I love this story, you write beautifully. I read up to chapter 2 in math class and I was pretty much in tears when I read he had left in BPov. I can't wait for more!
3/25/2010 c3 sas
Even though I knew he was going to leave - you still had me holding my breath for him to stay. LOVE your writing can not wait for more.
Even though I knew he was going to leave - you still had me holding my breath for him to stay. LOVE your writing can not wait for more.
3/25/2010 c3 
2kickedbckntn
k, you have a talent to make me cry. That was teh most heart breaking ending to a chapter. Damn where do you come up for your ideas...what are you eating & drinking that gives these wonderful tales. I do hope you will be updateing this story soon. I know you are still working on "Taken" but by jiknos this is one hell of a story as well. just what I needed another story to drive the wedge between my FF life and real life. lol.
2kickedbckntnk, you have a talent to make me cry. That was teh most heart breaking ending to a chapter. Damn where do you come up for your ideas...what are you eating & drinking that gives these wonderful tales. I do hope you will be updateing this story soon. I know you are still working on "Taken" but by jiknos this is one hell of a story as well. just what I needed another story to drive the wedge between my FF life and real life. lol.
3/25/2010 c2 lalaalaaa
Aww.. I like the fact that he had left his dog tag with her. I think that's sweet. :)
Aww.. I like the fact that he had left his dog tag with her. I think that's sweet. :)
3/25/2010 c3 sternie
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. Honestly, I didn't even need the lemon and, trust me, some peoples stories need the lemons to be worth reading. It absolutely broke my heart when he left. I'm torn between begging you to continue this, like NOW, and asking you to concentrate on Taken because I'm so into that story. I love them both but this one has tugged a heart string, which is kind of hard for a fan fic to do for me. I love this story.
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. Honestly, I didn't even need the lemon and, trust me, some peoples stories need the lemons to be worth reading. It absolutely broke my heart when he left. I'm torn between begging you to continue this, like NOW, and asking you to concentrate on Taken because I'm so into that story. I love them both but this one has tugged a heart string, which is kind of hard for a fan fic to do for me. I love this story.
3/25/2010 c3 njochara
((hugs))
aw that was brilliant!
and so sad !
((hugs))
aw that was brilliant!
and so sad !
3/25/2010 c3 TeamEdward4ever97
*hugs you* Aww this was just too sad! *cries* i really did cry..but i didn't have a tissue..oh wel :(... please please please update soon i really really really love this story! I feel horrible for Edward.. :( I don't really understand why he left..he should've just stayed! That idiot :P
*hugs you* Aww this was just too sad! *cries* i really did cry..but i didn't have a tissue..oh wel :(... please please please update soon i really really really love this story! I feel horrible for Edward.. :( I don't really understand why he left..he should've just stayed! That idiot :P
3/25/2010 c3 mountainlion718
PLEASE don't tell me that was the end :( i'm freaking bawling right now! he must have seen a lot of screwed up crap in the military for thinking the way he does now. i think Bella won't stop looking for him until she finds him
PLEASE don't tell me that was the end :( i'm freaking bawling right now! he must have seen a lot of screwed up crap in the military for thinking the way he does now. i think Bella won't stop looking for him until she finds him
3/25/2010 c3 HedgehogDK
Oh, poor Edward! Please tell me these two will meet again and he's going to get better...
Oh, poor Edward! Please tell me these two will meet again and he's going to get better...
3/25/2010 c3 1suziefknQ
Gah! So sad... and sweet... and just... I love it!
I'm so happy I get to look forward to an entire story line full of these two awesome characters. EPOV is great by the way. I adore your Edward, and his internal dialogue is written so sincerely.
:D Thanks for a brilliant beginning to what I know will be a favorite story!
1suziefknQGah! So sad... and sweet... and just... I love it!
I'm so happy I get to look forward to an entire story line full of these two awesome characters. EPOV is great by the way. I adore your Edward, and his internal dialogue is written so sincerely.
:D Thanks for a brilliant beginning to what I know will be a favorite story!
3/25/2010 c3 3MrsEdwardCullenP
The only thing I can offer you know, is only to tell you this:
DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE END THIS STORY HERE!
My god I am crying so hard and I can't stop... Please update...PLEASE!
3MrsEdwardCullenPThe only thing I can offer you know, is only to tell you this:
DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE END THIS STORY HERE!
My god I am crying so hard and I can't stop... Please update...PLEASE!
3/25/2010 c3 mommymac0508
The love making was intence from both sides and the was
Heartbreaking on both side also please update soon
The love making was intence from both sides and the was
Heartbreaking on both side also please update soon