
3/23/2010 c1 tanya
amazing
amazing
3/23/2010 c1 Edwards squeaky chew toy
Good story hope you decide to continue. Really enjoy your writing also reading taken.
Good story hope you decide to continue. Really enjoy your writing also reading taken.
3/23/2010 c1
5lilsunnysaunt
This story was great! I really enjoyed it. I hope that you do decide to make it into a short story. I would definately read it.

This story was great! I really enjoyed it. I hope that you do decide to make it into a short story. I would definately read it.
3/23/2010 c1 blackbird 1959
YES! YES! YES! turn this oneshot into a short story! It was great!
But your writing is always very good. Take Care X
YES! YES! YES! turn this oneshot into a short story! It was great!
But your writing is always very good. Take Care X
3/23/2010 c1 YankeeDiva
Honestly I love this whole concept of this story and I'm so hoping you continue with this because it's unlike anything else I've read.
Excellent opening!~
Honestly I love this whole concept of this story and I'm so hoping you continue with this because it's unlike anything else I've read.
Excellent opening!~
3/23/2010 c1 shea1223
LOVE IT!
LOVE IT!
3/23/2010 c1 Edward's-a-beefcake
You so totally HAVE to continue this! This is awesome! Please, please please!
You so totally HAVE to continue this! This is awesome! Please, please please!
3/23/2010 c1
3waterrockz
that was amazing! this story had me hooked from the moment she met edward outside in the snow. keep up the great work, time, and effort that you are putting into this fanstic story. i cant wait to read more. i was left with many questions and i cant wait to see where this story goes

that was amazing! this story had me hooked from the moment she met edward outside in the snow. keep up the great work, time, and effort that you are putting into this fanstic story. i cant wait to read more. i was left with many questions and i cant wait to see where this story goes
3/23/2010 c1 guppyloveshoes
what no why does it have to end there? oh that makes me so sad:( i hope you continue this so ill put it on story alert!
what no why does it have to end there? oh that makes me so sad:( i hope you continue this so ill put it on story alert!
3/23/2010 c1 keitachibana
wow, such a beautiful and fantastic story !
One chapter obviously is not ENOUGH !
please go on and write more soon.
Love this mute Edward :D
wow, such a beautiful and fantastic story !
One chapter obviously is not ENOUGH !
please go on and write more soon.
Love this mute Edward :D