for The Blizzard3/23/2010 c1 mountainlion718
this was freaking awesome, i really hope you continue it after TAKEN. why didn't he stay :( how will she ever find him again.
this was freaking awesome, i really hope you continue it after TAKEN. why didn't he stay :( how will she ever find him again.
3/23/2010 c1 
4random-lemon
Great story! I would love it if you were to turn it into a longer story. Though I must admit, the thought of you actually finishing 'Taken' is not something that I take lightly...I kind of hoping that it goes on forever and ever!
Thanks
random_lemon
4random-lemonGreat story! I would love it if you were to turn it into a longer story. Though I must admit, the thought of you actually finishing 'Taken' is not something that I take lightly...I kind of hoping that it goes on forever and ever!
Thanks
random_lemon
3/23/2010 c1 Michelle
Continue this ASAP! SO much better than Taken! At least I think. Sorry but it's true. I can't believe he just left! No! Stay Edward! You felt that connection
Continue this ASAP! SO much better than Taken! At least I think. Sorry but it's true. I can't believe he just left! No! Stay Edward! You felt that connection
3/23/2010 c1 azure0610
I ran up on this by chance and I am SQUEALING like Alice over a sale! Please continue this! I love it so far. Love it, Love It, LOVE IT! Bella's internal chatter is hilarious.
The police call would have went over JUST like that.
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Fuck! I can just see the headlines now: 'Cop's daughter raped and murdered in her own home'. 'Naive small town girl who trusted everyone ended up paying the ultimate price'. And so on, and so on. I'll be a cautionary tale!
For REAL Bella! Get the guy to talk if he's going to be stalking you like that.
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THAT was one of the BEST first time/one night stand lemons I've ever read. Sure the speedy, skin slapping, pouncing the headboard into the wall ones are hot but THIS right here was just...I'm practically sliding off the chair it was was hot and good. And oh so tender.
I'm really wanting to know more about Muteward because I am loving his no talking ass. What bitch let him go? And I'm curious about his military past. Was he dishonorably discharged? Is that why he's homeless? So many questions. You have a GREAT idea here. You must continue it. This cannot just be a oneshot or something short. You have a lot to go on just with this little bit from Edward
And I'm literally in tears over him leaving
I ran up on this by chance and I am SQUEALING like Alice over a sale! Please continue this! I love it so far. Love it, Love It, LOVE IT! Bella's internal chatter is hilarious.
The police call would have went over JUST like that.
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Fuck! I can just see the headlines now: 'Cop's daughter raped and murdered in her own home'. 'Naive small town girl who trusted everyone ended up paying the ultimate price'. And so on, and so on. I'll be a cautionary tale!
For REAL Bella! Get the guy to talk if he's going to be stalking you like that.
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THAT was one of the BEST first time/one night stand lemons I've ever read. Sure the speedy, skin slapping, pouncing the headboard into the wall ones are hot but THIS right here was just...I'm practically sliding off the chair it was was hot and good. And oh so tender.
I'm really wanting to know more about Muteward because I am loving his no talking ass. What bitch let him go? And I'm curious about his military past. Was he dishonorably discharged? Is that why he's homeless? So many questions. You have a GREAT idea here. You must continue it. This cannot just be a oneshot or something short. You have a lot to go on just with this little bit from Edward
And I'm literally in tears over him leaving
3/23/2010 c1 1aileas1
heck yeah! please DO turn this into a multi-chapter story! I loved it :-) And I am SO intrigued, argh! What is wrong with him, how did he end up homeless, was he in the army? guh, you definitely left us with enough unanswered questions for a whole story!
This has gone straight into my favorites, obviously. Can't end up missing the rest when you start posting it!
1aileas1heck yeah! please DO turn this into a multi-chapter story! I loved it :-) And I am SO intrigued, argh! What is wrong with him, how did he end up homeless, was he in the army? guh, you definitely left us with enough unanswered questions for a whole story!
This has gone straight into my favorites, obviously. Can't end up missing the rest when you start posting it!
3/23/2010 c1 iamawickedchild
What do you mean "maybe"? you MUST make this into a story! please! *wet puppy dog eyes*
I loved it! found it so sweet! and Bella is hillarious! i´d love to know more about Edward and what the f happened to him! and please a HEA! i can´t read un-happy endings :(
What do you mean "maybe"? you MUST make this into a story! please! *wet puppy dog eyes*
I loved it! found it so sweet! and Bella is hillarious! i´d love to know more about Edward and what the f happened to him! and please a HEA! i can´t read un-happy endings :(
3/23/2010 c1 Spunkie09
I really liked it...would like to read a few more chaps to see what Edwards story is AND for them to be together again...of course! LOL
I really liked it...would like to read a few more chaps to see what Edwards story is AND for them to be together again...of course! LOL
3/23/2010 c1 TeamEdward4ever97
Aw :) that was the sweetest story ever! Please continue A.S.A.P! I always love your stories! Even Taken is amazing! But this actually might be better...
Aw :) that was the sweetest story ever! Please continue A.S.A.P! I always love your stories! Even Taken is amazing! But this actually might be better...
3/23/2010 c1 1Blou97
What a sweet story. I hope you contiue and we learn a little bit more about Edward. Well done.
1Blou97What a sweet story. I hope you contiue and we learn a little bit more about Edward. Well done.
3/23/2010 c1 Isarma
Wow...fantastic! What can I say, you're a fantastic writer! I love this story...and once again, I find myself totally hooked! :)
Wow...fantastic! What can I say, you're a fantastic writer! I love this story...and once again, I find myself totally hooked! :)