for Back Where We Started4/23/2011 c10 
5Ana Paula92
ow, that was so cute - Flynn talking about how he lost his virginity, that is. I really like how you develop their relationship - i've said that already, haven't i?
in the university, i haven't had the time to read much lately, but i'm really glad i took the time to read this. it's amazing how i get into the story and how happy i am - though disappointed the chapter ended too fast.
geez, it's been long since i've last written something in english, sorry if i mispelled something or said something which doesn't make sense...
5Ana Paula92ow, that was so cute - Flynn talking about how he lost his virginity, that is. I really like how you develop their relationship - i've said that already, haven't i?
in the university, i haven't had the time to read much lately, but i'm really glad i took the time to read this. it's amazing how i get into the story and how happy i am - though disappointed the chapter ended too fast.
geez, it's been long since i've last written something in english, sorry if i mispelled something or said something which doesn't make sense...
4/23/2011 c10 7orangepotato
Yippy! Another chapter! I was actually wondering what had happened, but I knew you were a person who wouldn't just drop a story, so I wasn't terribly concerned about it. I'm glad things have straightened out and you can get back to more writing!
Loved this chapter! Got some adorable YuriFlynn in there as well as some very interesting information... gotta wonder what's going on with that. A bunch of teachers, who are all decent at their jobs, being let off? Very curious indeed. Also, I can't help but think that the ending of this chapter has something to do with this mess... did something terrible happen? Something big is starting to go down and it can only get more complicated, interesting and awesome as it goes on!
I liked the part when Yuri and Flynn were sleeping together! That was very adorable and well written, and of course it was funny when Kyle was there to interrupt. At least he's not like Yuri's roommate. XD
Loved the scene on the roof too. I like how Flynn was a bit more reserved in his story telling where Yuri was just like, "age, where, who." Gotta love the difference between them... I think that's what makes them work together so well, one's reserved while the other is outgoing.
Very well written and always enjoyable! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm excited how this relationship and plot continue to unfold.
Update again soon!
Orangepotato
7orangepotatoYippy! Another chapter! I was actually wondering what had happened, but I knew you were a person who wouldn't just drop a story, so I wasn't terribly concerned about it. I'm glad things have straightened out and you can get back to more writing!
Loved this chapter! Got some adorable YuriFlynn in there as well as some very interesting information... gotta wonder what's going on with that. A bunch of teachers, who are all decent at their jobs, being let off? Very curious indeed. Also, I can't help but think that the ending of this chapter has something to do with this mess... did something terrible happen? Something big is starting to go down and it can only get more complicated, interesting and awesome as it goes on!
I liked the part when Yuri and Flynn were sleeping together! That was very adorable and well written, and of course it was funny when Kyle was there to interrupt. At least he's not like Yuri's roommate. XD
Loved the scene on the roof too. I like how Flynn was a bit more reserved in his story telling where Yuri was just like, "age, where, who." Gotta love the difference between them... I think that's what makes them work together so well, one's reserved while the other is outgoing.
Very well written and always enjoyable! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm excited how this relationship and plot continue to unfold.
Update again soon!
Orangepotato
4/23/2011 c10 11Kichi Hisaki
It was short, but it opened up some plot for the story. I liiiiiked it.
Wow, Flynn really lost his virginity like that? Cool. It's like a teenage girl's dream come true (minus the same sex part...)!
Update soon!
11Kichi HisakiIt was short, but it opened up some plot for the story. I liiiiiked it.
Wow, Flynn really lost his virginity like that? Cool. It's like a teenage girl's dream come true (minus the same sex part...)!
Update soon!
4/22/2011 c10 2Mizu Hoseki
-secretly snaps a photo of the two while they're sleeping-
so cute ^_^
I can honestly say, those two are good for each other ^_^
Yuri's too reckless and Flynn is a little too uptight
-giggles-
what a 'romantic' dinner, right?
interesting chapter ^_^
~Mizu
2Mizu Hoseki-secretly snaps a photo of the two while they're sleeping-
so cute ^_^
I can honestly say, those two are good for each other ^_^
Yuri's too reckless and Flynn is a little too uptight
-giggles-
what a 'romantic' dinner, right?
interesting chapter ^_^
~Mizu
4/22/2011 c10 57Rydia Asuka
Trust Mr. Good-and-Noble Flynn to see fit to try and solve the Mystery of the Pink-Slipped Professors. He's such a sweetie, really. :3 Though it seems like a bit of a role-reversal, having Flynn drag Yuri into something for once, rather than the other way around. Yuri got him back, though. Poor Flynnie, being forced to break the rules. Guess that's a prerequisite of dating Yuri, though. ;3
I laughed at their little game of truth-or-truth. Trust Yuri to be painfully blunt and totally intrusive in his questioning. At first, I thought it a bit odd that Flynn would, well, give up his virginity like that, but thinking on it a bit harder...yeah. The game did say that Flynn was a bigger trouble-maker than Yuri when they were younger, so yeah. I buy it. He hasn't always been a goody-two-shoes. He's got the same reckless streak as Yuri, he just hides and controls it better. ;3
In your review response to me, you mentioned that the banter with only text thing was experimental. Well, I gotta say, I tried it out myself in one of my stories, and I liked the result. It was a good idea. :D
Don't worry about slow updates. If you take awhile, you take awhile. Life comes first, fan fiction writing can wait; you shouldn't feel guilty about that. :) Still, I did enjoy the update, and I look forward to the next one, whenever you get the time.
57Rydia AsukaTrust Mr. Good-and-Noble Flynn to see fit to try and solve the Mystery of the Pink-Slipped Professors. He's such a sweetie, really. :3 Though it seems like a bit of a role-reversal, having Flynn drag Yuri into something for once, rather than the other way around. Yuri got him back, though. Poor Flynnie, being forced to break the rules. Guess that's a prerequisite of dating Yuri, though. ;3
I laughed at their little game of truth-or-truth. Trust Yuri to be painfully blunt and totally intrusive in his questioning. At first, I thought it a bit odd that Flynn would, well, give up his virginity like that, but thinking on it a bit harder...yeah. The game did say that Flynn was a bigger trouble-maker than Yuri when they were younger, so yeah. I buy it. He hasn't always been a goody-two-shoes. He's got the same reckless streak as Yuri, he just hides and controls it better. ;3
In your review response to me, you mentioned that the banter with only text thing was experimental. Well, I gotta say, I tried it out myself in one of my stories, and I liked the result. It was a good idea. :D
Don't worry about slow updates. If you take awhile, you take awhile. Life comes first, fan fiction writing can wait; you shouldn't feel guilty about that. :) Still, I did enjoy the update, and I look forward to the next one, whenever you get the time.
4/22/2011 c10 1Dreamer's Samhain
These two are adorable. Really. Anyway, I think I'm gonna go re-read this so I can remember everything that has happened.
Also. I really love that this story is well written. So thank you!
Dreamer
1Dreamer's SamhainThese two are adorable. Really. Anyway, I think I'm gonna go re-read this so I can remember everything that has happened.
Also. I really love that this story is well written. So thank you!
Dreamer
4/22/2011 c10 1Flawed Imagination
Man, I love how absolutely nothing bothers Yuri. It made me laugh SO hard. Very nice work, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
1Flawed ImaginationMan, I love how absolutely nothing bothers Yuri. It made me laugh SO hard. Very nice work, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
4/22/2011 c10 deactivatedsinceforever
Sixteen, my friend's basement, his older brother.
O_O Yuri... You man-whore.
I LOL'd during this chapter. Just... Wow. I love the humor here. It's not outrageous but it's still funny as hell.
I can't wait for the next update.
Sixteen, my friend's basement, his older brother.
O_O Yuri... You man-whore.
I LOL'd during this chapter. Just... Wow. I love the humor here. It's not outrageous but it's still funny as hell.
I can't wait for the next update.
4/22/2011 c10 3Voelen
I had been waiting for some time for an update of your story. I just love it.
And what with the fired professors ? Alexei evil schemes ?
Yuri doubting Flynn has... already done IT. I can imagine it very well. And Flynn's face at the time.
Well, I hope you'll update soon (it's been too long).
3VoelenI had been waiting for some time for an update of your story. I just love it.
And what with the fired professors ? Alexei evil schemes ?
Yuri doubting Flynn has... already done IT. I can imagine it very well. And Flynn's face at the time.
Well, I hope you'll update soon (it's been too long).
4/8/2011 c9 Okami
*twitch* ... *twitch* You better continue this or i will... i dont know what i will do...PLEASE! CONTINUE!
*twitch* ... *twitch* You better continue this or i will... i dont know what i will do...PLEASE! CONTINUE!
3/25/2011 c6 Alleni
I wasn't sure how best to get this to you, since I'm about as lurkerish as they come on this site, but...
http:/alleni.deviantart.com/art/fanart-Back-Where-We-Started-202220047
I hope it's an adequate expression of my appreciation for your writing!
I wasn't sure how best to get this to you, since I'm about as lurkerish as they come on this site, but...
http:/alleni.deviantart.com/art/fanart-Back-Where-We-Started-202220047
I hope it's an adequate expression of my appreciation for your writing!
3/5/2011 c9 Mystearical
Has he finally (belatedly) discovered Sohpia's evil, Yuri-stabbing bitchness? TELL ME IT IS SO FOR IT MUST BE, I CANNOT BEAR THE THOUGHT OF IT NOT OCCURRING!
Also, love the story, please update soon!
Has he finally (belatedly) discovered Sohpia's evil, Yuri-stabbing bitchness? TELL ME IT IS SO FOR IT MUST BE, I CANNOT BEAR THE THOUGHT OF IT NOT OCCURRING!
Also, love the story, please update soon!
2/18/2011 c2 Fonbella
"The conversation was already 'it's not you, it's me,' 'moving too fast,' and 'define the relationship' all rolled into one. Where was one of those long knives the shop used to cut bread for sandwiches when Yuri needed it? Ritual seppuku was starting to look pretty good at the moment."
This has to be the best paragraph in a fanfic EVER. I lol'ed so much at that I had to stop reading and go to the bathroom wash my face in order to stop the tears that were blurring my vision. Ingenious!
"The conversation was already 'it's not you, it's me,' 'moving too fast,' and 'define the relationship' all rolled into one. Where was one of those long knives the shop used to cut bread for sandwiches when Yuri needed it? Ritual seppuku was starting to look pretty good at the moment."
This has to be the best paragraph in a fanfic EVER. I lol'ed so much at that I had to stop reading and go to the bathroom wash my face in order to stop the tears that were blurring my vision. Ingenious!