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2/11/2011 c9 11Kichi Hisaki
Okay. You should know that I love your stories. They are always so well written and the characters are in great character. I really love your work.

Now, I should let you know that I mean absolutely no offense by this, but that last line was so absolutely breathtakingly and hilariously mood-killing. Not necissarily in a bad way, but it was obviously going on to be dramatic and suspensful and meant to be a very serious cliffhanger, and all I could see in my head was Flynn in a Power Rangers suit and saying something out of one of those bad Asian movies, with the horribly off voice-acting to boot. The only thing that would have made me laugh more would be if it was raining, too.

I really don't mean to offend or upset you by saying that. It was just really funny, and I wanted to share it with you, as well as let you know that the ending probably didn't have the desired effect concerning the respone of your readers. (Though, it would surprise me if Flynn were to really state things the way he did.)

And I'm also sure that if I could share with you the exact images I have in my head you would be crying tears of laughter, too. I'll probably draw it later and laugh myself silly again.

On another note...

So, Yuri's afraid of falling in love. I can only imagine how this is going to turn out when Flynn finds out.

And...Duke wants to room with Yuri? Heck to the yes! I dunno why. Is Duke wanting to room with Yuri because he is (deepens voice) "different from the other humans that walk and polute this earth, and maybe in him I can find hope to believe in humanity again"?


(I'm in a really weird mood right now, so don't worry if I'm not making a whole lot of sense.)

Update soon!
1/30/2011 c9 BoredAsUsual13
Again this one also has a point.
1/28/2011 c9 Darkle
...Oh dear, I hope you update, because. Um. Sudden cliffhanger much. But no, really; loved the story, this couple needs more love, yada yada. Thought the use of real-world, real-time events was a nice touch. Intelligent, even? An informing read, I guess. You seem like the kind who might actually bother reading the headlines, which is always a treat to find. Will you also mention the repeal of the Don't Ask Don't Tell policy? Now I'm curious. I really do like all your works, even though I'm not around all that much. Fandom needs more love. Tales needs more fandom in general. There are rumors of an English release for Graces... but, yeah, hope you find great success and enjoyment in continuing this and Glass Fortress. I have a profile, btw, but am too lazy to look up my password, ahaha.
1/22/2011 c9 2kitkit11183
This story is really interesting! I love how you progress the characters and their relations with each other. Everything is made very believable and realistic in this fic. Good job so far!
1/9/2011 c9 Syeroix

Cliffhanger. Now I'm going to be wondering what happened until you update again. Still a good chapter and nicely in tune with the characters.

Much Love.
1/7/2011 c9 5Ana Paula92
happy new year!

i know it must be hard for you to update, i mean if you don't update much i can assume it's because of you know, real life, but i'm so glad you still take the time to do so, and don't just drop it.

i've already told you how u find your writing stile enchancing and just so... right. the plotline, also, specially this last one chapter, is really making me curious. i can't wait to read the rest of it!
1/7/2011 c9 1EverDarkSilver
I am extremely happy that this fic exists. It's stories like this that make me able to retain my belief in fanfic. Well-written, delightfully in character, and absorbing. Please update soon. 3
1/6/2011 c9 2Mizu Hoseki
-sits in her chair and switching her gaze from the last line to the chapter list-

where's 10... Cliffhanger...

-bangs her head onto her desk-

why do you people torment me so?

-looks up at the screen with puppy dog eyes-

I wanna know what the horribly thing is, I really do!

-pouts at the screen-

guess I'm gonna have to wait, right? drats...

1/2/2011 c9 6RisingTwilight
ARGH! Cliffhanger! Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter! Hmmm... I feel like Flynn's discovery has something to do with the mysterious school administration.

Meanwhile, Duke! I like his real name. I've always wished there were more fanfics about Duke on this site. He seems like a really fun character to write. I'm curious to see what he's up to.

And I really liked the pure dialogue section of this chapter. I can't wait till next time!
1/1/2011 c9 16CrystallizedPen
Woa, I thought that you have forgotten this story for good. It has been such a long time since your last update. I'm really happy that you still writing this stuffs.

And happy new year to you, and I await for the next update!

p/s: I really wonder what is Flynn's problem...!
1/1/2011 c9 Cheescakes
Yay! Thanks for updating this! Please keep up the awsome work!

and lol Witcher's nerdiness put Flynn's to shame XD

I also like how you keep all the things from the game like the characters and names of places and things and make them all flow into your story.

Can't wait for the next one!
1/1/2011 c9 2Azure-Wulfe
..Duke as a roomie? That spells for an interesting time xD

And awesome little make-out session.. naughty boys xD Go study! *cough*

And another cliffhanger! You temptress you! :D
12/31/2010 c9 57Rydia Asuka
Okay...loved the Yuri and Flynn scenes in this chapter. The one with just them talking was...amazingly effective. I really enjoyed it. Also Yuri pulling back over the whole 'feelings' thing was so very...Yuri.

Hm, so just what is Duke up to? That's definitely drawing my curiosity. (Hopefully they won't end up fighting over the world again... :3)

OKAY SO WHAT DID FLYNN LEARN? I am most curious about this. Especially considering blondie seems to think they can do something about whatever is horrible. Or whatever. Kaufman's attitude...Alexei's scheming. I'm definitely intrigued.

I'm looking forward to more. Please, do keep being awesome! :D Happy New Year!
12/31/2010 c9 Seraphic Dragon
Wh-wha? Nooo, no! I want more. :( You left me hanging. I wanna know what it is that Flynn needs help with. :( Now I'm gonna be thinking about this story until you update.

Great chapter btw. I love how Yuri's like "Zomg, there's some emotion in these kisses. I-I'm not ready!"

I love these two. Eagerly awaiting your next update, be it this or Glass Fortress.
12/31/2010 c9 7orangepotato
You are still the master of updating when I need cheering up the most.

A lot of drama is occurring in my life and I really needed something to make my day better and then i check my inbox and... viola! You had updated one of your stories!

Loved the beginning about the(as you call it later) the 'letter-that-shall-not-be-named(or close to that effect) and I was cracking up laughing with the part of Yuri's new room mate. Damien Nomos(aka Duke)'s letter was hysterical! That is defiantly the way he'd write a letter, even if the occasion was informal.

Of course the Flynn/Yuri part was nice. :D Glad to see their relationship blossoming and I'm very interested to see how the relationship affects Yuri. His freak out about actual affection being present has me interested. Plus, I just love Flynn's mom. The very subtle hint of 'leaving the door open'. And the all text part was nice. XD You have a wonderful skill with detail, but even just plain dialog was wonderful. You explained enough that one could get the sense of what was going on. Lols to Yuri wanting a B paper... I can see Flynn getting ruffled at that. :D

Estelle, Judith and Yuri's interactions are so natural! You do a wonderful job with them. I love that Yuri knows the 'lets go shopping' face. I'd love to see what happens when Judith finally convinces him to go on a shopping adventure with them. :D Perhaps a shopping adventure with Flynn, Yuri, Estelle and Judith?

Endings got me really excited for the next update. What's wrong with Kaufman? I completely agree with Yuri when it was defiantly something serious that bothered her. The question that arises is if what Flynn has found out is related to what got Kaufman riled up...? So many questions.

Thanks for the update! Get the next update(either this one or Glass Fortress) as soon as possible! Can't wait to see what's going to happen with everything!

Thanks again for making my day!

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