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6/14/2017 c1 Guest
Did you quote phineis and ferb in your first aurthor note
Did you quote phineis and ferb in your first aurthor note
10/1/2015 c5 Army girl 101
OMG that was really good! You should post more of these kinds of stories ! :)
OMG that was really good! You should post more of these kinds of stories ! :)
4/9/2015 c5 PennName
ForeverGirl, you are one lucky duck.
ForeverGirl, you are one lucky duck.
3/26/2014 c4 Unknown cool man
Add some sex
Add some sex
6/22/2013 c5 Guest
I LOVE Avatar and that's one of my favorite episodes!
I LOVE Avatar and that's one of my favorite episodes!
6/5/2013 c4 Guest
what the ...
what the ...
8/3/2012 c5 
3yellowhellow
Oh My hot-man(see what I did their?!)!I love Avatar! Like, all the lines are awesome!My favorite episode is "The Headband"!
3yellowhellowOh My hot-man(see what I did their?!)!I love Avatar! Like, all the lines are awesome!My favorite episode is "The Headband"!
6/30/2011 c5 Guest
I remember that when I was reading the story I was like didn't I hear that before
I remember that when I was reading the story I was like didn't I hear that before
12/3/2010 c5 anonymous
i love that show too. i just started watching that show recently when I went to my dads house with my mom and sisters in georgia to visit him fir thnksgig (my parents arent divorsed were moving)
i love that show too. i just started watching that show recently when I went to my dads house with my mom and sisters in georgia to visit him fir thnksgig (my parents arent divorsed were moving)
8/5/2010 c5 someone
make more chapter plz
make more chapter plz
4/8/2010 c5 7Xx VioletBaby12 xX
Ah, that was amazing. Your awesome. this was the cutest thing ever. I love Avatar the Last airbender too. Is there more?
7Xx VioletBaby12 xXAh, that was amazing. Your awesome. this was the cutest thing ever. I love Avatar the Last airbender too. Is there more?
4/8/2010 c5 1Child of the Doomed
Ah ha. So it was a math tutor. Percy's innocent then. Damn...
OR IS HE? People lie. He's probably innocent, though. I'll give him the benefit of the doubt. He has good taste in cartoons. =)
Overall, awesome story. I love me some happy endings.
1Child of the DoomedAh ha. So it was a math tutor. Percy's innocent then. Damn...
OR IS HE? People lie. He's probably innocent, though. I'll give him the benefit of the doubt. He has good taste in cartoons. =)
Overall, awesome story. I love me some happy endings.
4/8/2010 c5 1Khyron56
Wow. To think how one person, could sit on both sides of the fence with such conviction, is just great. I'm sorry, but I've seen this type of story before, with a similiar resolution, and you aren't exactly bringing anything new to the table.
I'm not critizing the story, at least not for anything on the surface. Your grammar, spelling, and plot development are excellent. My only problem, is that the plot itself is over-used, in one form or another.
Better luck next time.
-K.
1Khyron56Wow. To think how one person, could sit on both sides of the fence with such conviction, is just great. I'm sorry, but I've seen this type of story before, with a similiar resolution, and you aren't exactly bringing anything new to the table.
I'm not critizing the story, at least not for anything on the surface. Your grammar, spelling, and plot development are excellent. My only problem, is that the plot itself is over-used, in one form or another.
Better luck next time.
-K.