11/26/2022 c1 debb lavoie
Oh damn, that was so sad, truly a gut punch. Excellent writing.

12/15/2019 c1 moonwinks
I just found your story...almost 10 years after you wrote it. This was so horribly sad and I cried so much. I read Negative 20 and Falling and noted you said that it was such a change from the angst you ordinarily write. So I jumped in and found another story. Wow...whiplash. Taking a deep breath now...

3/17/2017 c1 Dizzien
Wow! This is not the first time that I've read this, but it is still just as powerful and beautiful as the first time.

3/8/2016 c1 2Comrade'sRoza
Beautiful!

11/2/2014 c1 NPakus
This was beautiful and sad and even hopeful...

8/15/2013 c1 meelee72
Oh, damn... Lemme put away the tissues first..
- Ur words... U & ur words, woman... U tell a story that I can see & feel. FEEL... really really feel.
This one has my heart in pieces...
- But u created a beautiful & glorious love.
... I feel kinda dumb becuz I don't know what else to say. - This was the most lovely, gut wrenching ache..
- Great job. U are a fabulous writer. - U convey real life so raw & believable. I feel it all.

5/12/2013 c1 4snoopylover60
Tears... this is so sad

2/27/2013 c1 3AlexisCullen19
This was sooo beauitful! Best one shot ive ever read. it was soo touching it made me cry!