
12/15/2019 c1 moonwinks
I just found your story...almost 10 years after you wrote it. This was so horribly sad and I cried so much. I read Negative 20 and Falling and noted you said that it was such a change from the angst you ordinarily write. So I jumped in and found another story. Wow...whiplash. Taking a deep breath now...
I just found your story...almost 10 years after you wrote it. This was so horribly sad and I cried so much. I read Negative 20 and Falling and noted you said that it was such a change from the angst you ordinarily write. So I jumped in and found another story. Wow...whiplash. Taking a deep breath now...
3/17/2017 c1 Dizzien
Wow! This is not the first time that I've read this, but it is still just as powerful and beautiful as the first time.
Wow! This is not the first time that I've read this, but it is still just as powerful and beautiful as the first time.
3/29/2016 c1 Guest
I'm crying. Thought you should know that.
I'm crying. Thought you should know that.
10/1/2015 c1 Katrina
Its beautiful
I am crying right now
Awesome really !
I love your writing
Its beautiful
I am crying right now
Awesome really !
I love your writing
8/15/2013 c1 meelee72
Oh, damn... Lemme put away the tissues first..
- Ur words... U & ur words, woman... U tell a story that I can see & feel. FEEL... really really feel.
This one has my heart in pieces...
- But u created a beautiful & glorious love.
... I feel kinda dumb becuz I don't know what else to say. - This was the most lovely, gut wrenching ache..
- Great job. U are a fabulous writer. - U convey real life so raw & believable. I feel it all.
Oh, damn... Lemme put away the tissues first..
- Ur words... U & ur words, woman... U tell a story that I can see & feel. FEEL... really really feel.
This one has my heart in pieces...
- But u created a beautiful & glorious love.
... I feel kinda dumb becuz I don't know what else to say. - This was the most lovely, gut wrenching ache..
- Great job. U are a fabulous writer. - U convey real life so raw & believable. I feel it all.
2/27/2013 c1
3AlexisCullen19
This was sooo beauitful! Best one shot ive ever read. it was soo touching it made me cry!

This was sooo beauitful! Best one shot ive ever read. it was soo touching it made me cry!