for Beside Quiet Waters4/14/2011 c1 Dantelover051386
Hallo,
WOW, blubbering like a idiot here and it really takes alot for me to reach blubber status folks. so sad. i figured he had to have died. none of us love to read about edward or bella dying, but it was very well wrote and had me in tears from the first word to the last word. a very big part of me says i would have jumped. a very big part of me would have jumped. it would have to been something of miracle status like my love coming back to me like edward did for bella to keep me from jumping. even though his promise was broken it was not by his choice. a simple accident took him away breaking his vow and the simple fact that he hung on long enough for bella to arrive to see him...shows his strength and love for her. bellas promise will not be easily kept, but she promised her love and despite how much i would want to be with him in the afterlife, i would honor his wishes, my promise to him, but i know that i would never love another and remain faithful to him even in death. oh, how i wished she had that little boy. part of him that survived. that would give her something to live for. its so easy to see how she believes she is alone. she lost there baby and now him. :(
Hallo,
WOW, blubbering like a idiot here and it really takes alot for me to reach blubber status folks. so sad. i figured he had to have died. none of us love to read about edward or bella dying, but it was very well wrote and had me in tears from the first word to the last word. a very big part of me says i would have jumped. a very big part of me would have jumped. it would have to been something of miracle status like my love coming back to me like edward did for bella to keep me from jumping. even though his promise was broken it was not by his choice. a simple accident took him away breaking his vow and the simple fact that he hung on long enough for bella to arrive to see him...shows his strength and love for her. bellas promise will not be easily kept, but she promised her love and despite how much i would want to be with him in the afterlife, i would honor his wishes, my promise to him, but i know that i would never love another and remain faithful to him even in death. oh, how i wished she had that little boy. part of him that survived. that would give her something to live for. its so easy to see how she believes she is alone. she lost there baby and now him. :(
4/11/2011 c1 Sally-anna Fanfic
Oh wow, I cant believe such a short story could bring me to tears like this did, I just knew where you were going with this but the tears came anyway.
Great story with so much emotion, cant wait to read the rest of your work x
Oh wow, I cant believe such a short story could bring me to tears like this did, I just knew where you were going with this but the tears came anyway.
Great story with so much emotion, cant wait to read the rest of your work x
4/10/2011 c1 sally70
Oh wow, I cant believe such a short story could bring me to tears like this did, I just knew where you were going with this but the tears came anyway.
Great story with so much emotion, cant wait to read the rest of your work x
Oh wow, I cant believe such a short story could bring me to tears like this did, I just knew where you were going with this but the tears came anyway.
Great story with so much emotion, cant wait to read the rest of your work x
31/17/2011 c1 kat
heartbreaking. your a wonderful writer.
heartbreaking. your a wonderful writer.
12/10/2010 c1 jeninef
Oh boy...I knew how it ended up,but I kept reading anyway...so beautifully written, but so sad and it totally brought tears to my eyes.
Oh boy...I knew how it ended up,but I kept reading anyway...so beautifully written, but so sad and it totally brought tears to my eyes.
11/29/2010 c1 deletedblankaccount
I saw it coming, but I couldn't resist reading it!
Well I must say that you are a exceptionally good writer, you know that don't you? Well if you didn't, you surely know now! (;
Welcome to my favorite author-list! C;
I saw it coming, but I couldn't resist reading it!
Well I must say that you are a exceptionally good writer, you know that don't you? Well if you didn't, you surely know now! (;
Welcome to my favorite author-list! C;
9/22/2010 c1 mrskabal
Saw that one coming but still couldn't resist reading it. Jeaze, just tear out my heart and stomp on it why don't you. The really heart wrenching thing about this is that for many people, this is reality and not just a work of fiction. Loved this piece of work and am so glad that you enabled me, and countless others the opportunity to read it and am really looking forward to reading more of your work.
Saw that one coming but still couldn't resist reading it. Jeaze, just tear out my heart and stomp on it why don't you. The really heart wrenching thing about this is that for many people, this is reality and not just a work of fiction. Loved this piece of work and am so glad that you enabled me, and countless others the opportunity to read it and am really looking forward to reading more of your work.
9/3/2010 c1 Thirst for Knowledge
I loved watching their relationship develop, even all the way to the end. They were so good for each other.
I loved watching their relationship develop, even all the way to the end. They were so good for each other.