for Beside Quiet Waters8/25/2010 c1 SanguineTaurean
It is so, so very hard to "be happy" when one has lost as much as Bella in this story. It is tormenting to "just go on" with life. There is a sadness that never leaves.
It is so, so very hard to "be happy" when one has lost as much as Bella in this story. It is tormenting to "just go on" with life. There is a sadness that never leaves.
8/13/2010 c1 HopelessFanficWanderer
okay i dont get it, how can such short story pull you n and you want cry so bad? haha, it's good i like it! :D
okay i dont get it, how can such short story pull you n and you want cry so bad? haha, it's good i like it! :D
7/11/2010 c1 TwilightNJonas4Ever
This is absolutely beautiful... I am ready to cry :(
You are an amazing writer though! Keep up the astounding stories :)
This is absolutely beautiful... I am ready to cry :(
You are an amazing writer though! Keep up the astounding stories :)
5/18/2010 c1 
1AnjieNet
I have to have a multi-chap story with a HEA, but I'm a sucker for the O/S tearjerkers. Beautifully written. The "Be happy." ending gave me chills.
1AnjieNetI have to have a multi-chap story with a HEA, but I'm a sucker for the O/S tearjerkers. Beautifully written. The "Be happy." ending gave me chills.
5/16/2010 c1 1GAjujubee
I just realized I don't own any tissue by reading this. WOW! is all I can say. Thank you for writing this.
1GAjujubeeI just realized I don't own any tissue by reading this. WOW! is all I can say. Thank you for writing this.
5/12/2010 c1 nullaccount78
*sniffles and wipes away a tear*
this was really great
i love angsty one-shots
*sniffles and wipes away a tear*
this was really great
i love angsty one-shots
4/26/2010 c1 goldenhair
*sniffles*
Damn you. I have a big fat lump in my throat and it's all your fault.
Damn it. That was absolutely beautiful. I don't usually read angst, but something about this story lured me in and I just couldn't let it go. I loved the part about Edward wooing Bella, how much she resisted, how much they loved each other...
This is my favorite line:
"I declined his offers, and I tried to avoid him. Like an idiot, I ran from him.
But he just wouldn't go away."
So cute.
And I want to thank you for putting just the right amount of angst in this o/s. You managed to convey their love without stomping on our hearts when the end came.
*sniffles*
Damn you. I have a big fat lump in my throat and it's all your fault.
Damn it. That was absolutely beautiful. I don't usually read angst, but something about this story lured me in and I just couldn't let it go. I loved the part about Edward wooing Bella, how much she resisted, how much they loved each other...
This is my favorite line:
"I declined his offers, and I tried to avoid him. Like an idiot, I ran from him.
But he just wouldn't go away."
So cute.
And I want to thank you for putting just the right amount of angst in this o/s. You managed to convey their love without stomping on our hearts when the end came.
4/15/2010 c1 1midnightdancerx
Wow. First off, you have an incredible gift of writing. Please, don't give it up. This story is heartbreaking, and made me tear up a bit. Edward and Bella were so good for each other in this fic, and it's really sad to see them separated by his death. I loved reading on how their relationship progressed. It was really cute. I loved seeing how they relied on each other so much when Charlie and their son died. The ending, though, just about killed me. Those two words at the end- "Be happy"- break my heart every single time I read that part in New Moon. You did a really good job with this.
1midnightdancerxWow. First off, you have an incredible gift of writing. Please, don't give it up. This story is heartbreaking, and made me tear up a bit. Edward and Bella were so good for each other in this fic, and it's really sad to see them separated by his death. I loved reading on how their relationship progressed. It was really cute. I loved seeing how they relied on each other so much when Charlie and their son died. The ending, though, just about killed me. Those two words at the end- "Be happy"- break my heart every single time I read that part in New Moon. You did a really good job with this.
4/13/2010 c1 treasurecoast
Wow - this is so beautiful and heartbreaking. I loved watching their relationship unfold – how he brought her out and made her take a leap of faith. And although Bella’s angry and in pain from his death, at least she can never regret what they had. His last words to her just killed me.
Wow - this is so beautiful and heartbreaking. I loved watching their relationship unfold – how he brought her out and made her take a leap of faith. And although Bella’s angry and in pain from his death, at least she can never regret what they had. His last words to her just killed me.