for Beside Quiet Waters3/25/2010 c1 
14TG81
The whole time I'm thinking "is she gonna jump? She's gonna jump, it's an angst contest, she's totally gonna jump!"
But then you pull out the happy ending.
You and your twisted ways. Good luck!
14TG81The whole time I'm thinking "is she gonna jump? She's gonna jump, it's an angst contest, she's totally gonna jump!"
But then you pull out the happy ending.
You and your twisted ways. Good luck!
3/25/2010 c1 JAustenlover
It's really hard to type a review when your eyes are filled with tears, and all you want to do is sob.*chuckle* I was hanging on every word.
You have the gift of magical words, my dear. Truly. Once more, you caught me up in your story, and I felt Bella's sadness, the awful gaping void left with Edward's departure.
I loved your brushstrokes of canon that whispered across this piece, never blatant, never intrusive. You re-shape them and make them your own. Lovely.
Thank you.
*air kisses*
JA
It's really hard to type a review when your eyes are filled with tears, and all you want to do is sob.*chuckle* I was hanging on every word.
You have the gift of magical words, my dear. Truly. Once more, you caught me up in your story, and I felt Bella's sadness, the awful gaping void left with Edward's departure.
I loved your brushstrokes of canon that whispered across this piece, never blatant, never intrusive. You re-shape them and make them your own. Lovely.
Thank you.
*air kisses*
JA
3/25/2010 c1 Leo85
Wow, it's surprising how much you can put into one chapter.. You just describe things so well :) Is this gonna be more chapters? :) I sure hope so.. Thnx for writing something new! Will be following, as always :)
Iris
Wow, it's surprising how much you can put into one chapter.. You just describe things so well :) Is this gonna be more chapters? :) I sure hope so.. Thnx for writing something new! Will be following, as always :)
Iris
3/25/2010 c1 Hoshihime08
so sad! i loved the mix of canon words with a non-canon tale. but still, very very sad... *steals a kleenex*
so sad! i loved the mix of canon words with a non-canon tale. but still, very very sad... *steals a kleenex*
3/25/2010 c1 cullengirl1983
This is the most touching and emotional thing you've ever written. Or at least that I've read. I thought I saw this side of you in ALNM but I was clearly mistaken... this is true heartfail. It's so, so heart breaking. I have tears rolling down my face while I'm typing this. So well done and so well written. I can't believe what a punch you packed in only 2500 words.
This is the most touching and emotional thing you've ever written. Or at least that I've read. I thought I saw this side of you in ALNM but I was clearly mistaken... this is true heartfail. It's so, so heart breaking. I have tears rolling down my face while I'm typing this. So well done and so well written. I can't believe what a punch you packed in only 2500 words.
3/25/2010 c1 MrsEAC
Oh my. Oh, oh my. This was so painful. I cried from the very start. It's just so emotional and beautiful. Thank you for writing.
Oh my. Oh, oh my. This was so painful. I cried from the very start. It's just so emotional and beautiful. Thank you for writing.
3/25/2010 c1 Karandash86
This is one of the most heart wrenching things I've ever read. Bella is so depressed and in such grief. She's just so bereft and lonely. This just tore me apart. I loved it. Well done.
ni
This is one of the most heart wrenching things I've ever read. Bella is so depressed and in such grief. She's just so bereft and lonely. This just tore me apart. I loved it. Well done.
ni
3/25/2010 c1 1322blue
Oh, Katinki, that was gut wrenching. Seriously.
It was very real and believable and I could honestly see their courtship as it happened Her sadness broke my heart.
Nice job.
1322blueOh, Katinki, that was gut wrenching. Seriously.
It was very real and believable and I could honestly see their courtship as it happened Her sadness broke my heart.
Nice job.
3/25/2010 c1 10LJ Summers
Oh...this is so sad. :( I like how you have the rushing water serving as a backdrop for the whole thing, including the memories of sex and marriage. The water speaks of depth and change and motion...constant.
She is so tired. So desperately in mourning. I want to believe he IS with her. That he is there to reassure her and hope for her to continue on.
But I feel like she won't. Like her pain is more important than his love had been. And that is heartbreaking.
10LJ SummersOh...this is so sad. :( I like how you have the rushing water serving as a backdrop for the whole thing, including the memories of sex and marriage. The water speaks of depth and change and motion...constant.
She is so tired. So desperately in mourning. I want to believe he IS with her. That he is there to reassure her and hope for her to continue on.
But I feel like she won't. Like her pain is more important than his love had been. And that is heartbreaking.