
12/21/2010 c1
1S.E.E.S
How great your story is! And much for me 'cause I love those two! (I always see some things between them!)
Poor little kid xD

How great your story is! And much for me 'cause I love those two! (I always see some things between them!)
Poor little kid xD
6/17/2010 c1
1Relmitos
"As The Nights Before" it's one of those stories that puts you right into the story, a perfect fanfiction;
The story it self has a good back-story, that's important because you get to know the characters and their personality/motives.
The order of the acts it's good too, it makes a good dramatic yaoi story of confusion and love, and not just sex right in the minute.
The detailed actions where the creme of the creme, it made me feel like if I was reading a poem rather than a simple story.
Congratulations for such a beautiful piece of story you made, you really have imagination and creativity. :)

"As The Nights Before" it's one of those stories that puts you right into the story, a perfect fanfiction;
The story it self has a good back-story, that's important because you get to know the characters and their personality/motives.
The order of the acts it's good too, it makes a good dramatic yaoi story of confusion and love, and not just sex right in the minute.
The detailed actions where the creme of the creme, it made me feel like if I was reading a poem rather than a simple story.
Congratulations for such a beautiful piece of story you made, you really have imagination and creativity. :)
4/29/2010 c1 deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaad
That was amazing... Delicious. It was such a wonderful read! I was actually panting at the end, and I'm actually a little tired, like I was one of them... I'd love a sequel to this! 3
That was amazing... Delicious. It was such a wonderful read! I was actually panting at the end, and I'm actually a little tired, like I was one of them... I'd love a sequel to this! 3
3/28/2010 c1
21YouAStupidHoe69
*SQEE!* Sequal, please? I'm begging, becuase that was great. :) I loved it.

*SQEE!* Sequal, please? I'm begging, becuase that was great. :) I loved it.